Another story that I had originally decided not to post. There's a bunch of reasons why I wasn't going to, but the main one is subtleness. If you've read a lot of my stories you've probably guessed that I'm into the build up as much as (maybe more than) the payout. I love the story leading up to the vore (or transformation or whatever) as much as the vore itself. I love to write stories where the reader gets to use their imaginations to fill in the details. This is one of those stories. There is no actual vore here. We could have gone along to the cookout and found out what happened to Gus, but if I wrote down what happened to him then that's what happened to him, if you enjoyed it or not. Without detailing his fate, you can imagine it going down in whichever way you most enjoy.

Also, THERE'S NO ACTUAL INTERCOURSE IN THIS STORY. Yes, everybody could have had a big old orgy beside the pool, but that's not what I wanted to happen. Sometimes sex is less sexy than no sex.

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