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Pumping out another load of words here just like the pred in this one will be pumping out a lot of coils!
I thought of this story on a whim honestly and was surprised by how well it turne out. I'm quite proud of this one so I hope some of you like it too. There's not a ton of plot in this one but I'm trying out a kind of new dynamic between these characters so hopefully it will appeal to the masses.
And remember, the most important takeaway from this is, Don't talk to Strangers. Least you wind up like a certain someone...
Enjoy~
Posted by Mechdragon1k 9 months ago Report
I saw full tour and assumed that meant one of the prey would surivive
I was so confused by phone call, for a bit I assumed the friend being called was another pred that would fight the pred.
The little boy was cute, but having him close to vorny scenes felt awkward.
I assume the vorny scenes are meant to be sexual here.
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Posted by Voyager99 9 months ago Report
I feel like I've tagged my previous works with fulltour and it didn't promise any survival? But sorry if such was misleading.
And Nope. If you read closely you can see very clearly what the phone call represents and where it's coming from lol. It's confusing for a bit but it should have made sense eventually had you read on.
I don't make my vore scenes sexual with maybe one minor exception in the boyfriend one. And even then I didn't even tag it as such. I get what you're implying but that is so far from the case here. It's super clear that Shen doesn't derive pleasure from his meal. He just sees it as food. He only shelters Naioki and comes off as awkward because it's still technically murder.
You're free to not vibe with/like any of my stories but please don't make them out to be something they're not. Especially grosser topics like that..
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 9 months ago Report
Huh what does vore mean to you than.
I did read on and figure it out, but wound up rereading that part several times and make them confused.
I was not trying to make them out what they were not.
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 9 months ago Report
Do you want me to delete my post. I am sorry.
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Posted by Voyager99 9 months ago Report
It doesn't matter to me if you wish to delete it nor let it stay. This is a public forum and I'm all for freedom of speech within reason. I wanna hear what people have to say and react accordingly which is why I always have my comment section open to everyone on my works. So it is entirely up to you
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Posted by Voyager99 9 months ago Report
Depends. Could mean a lot of things to a lot of different people as I see it. And it gets even more confusing when looking at the subcategories.
Vore in general is seen as a fetish I'm aware, as well as the fact that this is a fetish site, but at the same time I don't believe everything relating to it has to be fetish-like nor sexual if that makes sense? Some bits are simply meant to drive the plot
But yeah I just wanted to make it clear that this wasn't the vibe I was going for. I have strong feelings on that type of thing
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Posted by Xenophage17 9 months ago Report
So awesome, absolutely love your disposal detail as always. The idea of a phone in the belly and vibrating deep in the intestines is great and the horror of realizing a previous friend is digesting directly below was woven in perfect. Also really appreciate the time you take to let things bake and the nice contrast between the violent digestion and more cute and soft brotherly interactions. Love both Shen and Naioki and the video game and bathroom stink back and forths. Would love to see Naioki with a full belly too, at first thought that was going to happen or that somehow a basketball was getting swallowed.
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Posted by Voyager99 9 months ago Report
Omg thanks so much! You're like the complete opposite of the comment above you lol! You for sure got the story and what I was trying to do to a T. I was trying something a bit new here so it makes me happy that it was received well.
I too love messy detailed disposal if my page wasn't enough to show for that haha. And yes, having a previous friend oh so conveniently digesting below you and adding insult by having him find out who through a gruesome phone call...Convoluted and pushing coincidences I'll be the first to admit, but I couldn't help myself. I mean after all this is all fiction right? Might as well have fun with it~
I'm glad you liked the dynamic between Shen and Naioki! I don't often do sibling/family dynamics and I only used a kid in my stories like once so this was new to me. I don't necessarily vibe with child preds though so I have to say you won't be getting that basketball scene out of me. I prefer his innocence on the topic and it further shows how Shen raised them as he strives to protect Naioki from such forbidden knowledge since he's young. Also he's not a pred– In my canon at least. But I can totally see the shenanigans of Naioki trying to copy his brother and attempting to eat things he shouldn't only to get a proper scolding haha.
Sorry for the word vomit I just enjoyed your review. Thanks for the comment! Made my day ^^
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Posted by Xenophage17 9 months ago Report
No worries happy for the word vomit, makes me feel more confident about my comments.
Nothing wrong with some coincidence and bent logic to get a fun idea in motion. Much like a pred belly stretching reality is part of the fun.
Yeah its a fun relationship dynamic which you don’t necessarily get a lot in vore stories. Usually pred characters tend towards completely shameless and outgoing or extremely shy and unsure. Shen reached an interesting middle ground being completely comfortable convering humans into waste while being very mindful of his brothers exposure.
Personally really enjoy child preds for the potential lack of understanding. Extreme innocence, cruelty and such. Absolutely understand people being uncomfortable of course, just got a clear fantasy/reality seperation in my head.
Anyway now I've gone on a bit so just thanks again for a really fun read.
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Posted by Voyager99 9 months ago Report
Oh sweet haha. Happy to provide then! I'm really glad it was seen for what it is. Again this is a first attempt into this dynamic on my end so it's up in the air how my readers/watchers react when they're maybe used to something else from me. But I'm just glad if even one other reader voiced that they shared the same vision as me is all. In the end I'm just here to write weird stories and make people happy man.
And to each their own. There's so many layers to vore as a whole that I'm not even going to try to dictate tastes. But I gotta stay true to my own themes ya feel? But yes, separating fantasy and reality is so important with stuff like this and sadly not everyone irl can...But this is getting preachy for a fetish site of all things so Ima leave that here lol. Didn't expect so many mixed views on this one story! Quite interesting and noted for the future.
Glad you had fun! Come back anytime ^^
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Posted by Xenophage17 9 months ago Report
No worries, apologies if I overdid it at all on the commenting or made you or anyone else uncomfortable. Really appreciate your attitude and style and will always be up to check out what you make.
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 9 months ago Report
I am a little embarrassed to be called out like this. I am rereading the fic so I did like it along with all your work.
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Posted by Voyager99 9 months ago Report
It's all opinions and personal takes at the end of the day. You don't gotta reanalyze it nor reread, especially if you got weird vibes from it. Don't worry there's no test on the book at the end of class lol.
I just thought it was funny how the first two comments were so opposite in nature and just had to point it out ^^
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Posted by ZaaZaa 9 months ago Report
God, I love how casual and annoyed Shen is <3
Moar, plz :3
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Posted by Voyager99 9 months ago Report
Ahh thankks! He really is a 'cant be bothered with drama' type of guy haha. I will admit I adore his cruel, food is food, nature as well. We'll see if he ever makes an apperance again but in thr meantime I have other mean, nonchalant preds on the my page if your're for that ^^
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