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My hungry naga pred Ser goes hunting, stuffs himself, finds a baby
Not sure what's going on here tbh, I like these characters' stories but I feel this was poorly executed
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Posted by Xenophage17 8 months ago Report
Love that attitude and dialogue a lot.
Posted by DontTellAny1 8 months ago Report
I really like this guy, him deciding to not eat something is very uncharacteristic of him, but for some reason it's the only story I've written about him. He's usually the sort that will swallow anything not nailed down, which I think is a fun attitude :]
Posted by Xenophage17 8 months ago Report
Yup I'm a big fan of the "he wasn't a wildlife enthusiast (excepting any that would fit down his throat) and he didn't care what the eggs were from. It only mattered where they would end up."
Posted by DontTellAny1 8 months ago Report
I'm really glad that you like some of the writing :)
Just trying my best to indicate that this guy does not care in the slightest what something is beyond "is it edible?"
Posted by Xenophage17 8 months ago Report
Comes across just from the blase reaction to realizing they are Naga eggs. Same species young, eh down the gullet they go.
Posted by DontTellAny1 8 months ago Report
Oh, they're only babies? Easier to catch then >:P
Posted by Xenophage17 8 months ago Report
Quite the story for the survivor.
"Oh your siblings? they were slurped up, crushed and broken down in my superior gut and squeezed out my cloaca as nothing butt waste. Any other questions?
Posted by DontTellAny1 8 months ago Report
But hey, he's not being *particularly* cruel- he was the one who hatched first of his own siblings, so a few of them met the same fate. That's just what people do, right..?
Posted by Xenophage17 8 months ago Report
Thats just one reason I'm enjoying your stuff
Posted by Unknownlurker 8 months ago Report
I really want to see that little guy become a recurring character. Just angry as hell at all times.
Posted by DontTellAny1 8 months ago Report
Yes, he does in fact survive his adopted dad and become just as vicious!
Posted by Heptarch8 3 months ago Report
this is unfairly hot for a story about eating babies tbh
Posted by DontTellAny1 2 months ago Report
yes i was rather confused by how much i liked the idea of him eating eggs