Posted by SkyVentus 7 months ago Report

Da king is back!

Posted by Kaguya1 7 months ago Report

"Kai had never lost a fight against a singular opponent, which made her a perfect duelist.
But Clorinde was similar in the exact same way, that she’d never lost a duel. Ever."

im eating popcorn and throwing it at the screen right now. lets. fucking. go.

"Simultaneously, the two of them thought…"
“She’s good.”

YOOOOOOOOOO. THIS IS WHAT I WANT TO SEE.

"Kai’s face created a pout unlike any other at how cold Clorinde was being to her."

...ffffuck. like the biggest duel i am having right now is struggling to decide who is the more adorable one at this point, kai or zhellsum...because you have been going with these lines and its driving me crazy. SHE is driving me crazy.

"That only added a whopping percentage to Clorinde’s lethality, skyrocketing her plan to kill Kai by another thirty percent. If the monster could not be wounded or slowed due to a regenerative healing factor like this, they were best put down."

there are a good amount of bits i could being up about their fight, but i like how well you bounce back and forth between whats going on in their heads when it comes to what they are thinking about. its good because YOU are good.

"Zombified, the corpse of Kai sprang into action when the nostrils of her head had been graced with the wonderful frenzy of smells that suddenly wafted into the air with the removal of Clorinde’s boots to expose her socked feet."

i love kai so much. i love kai so fucking much.

"Even more so when Kai’s mouth opened to steal those socked toes into her mouth, violating each toe thoroughly with her tongue over and over again for the moment."

i am now on my knees, for her. what do you want me to say, like. its just beautiful.

"The massive bulge of Clorinde swiftly traveling through the tunnel of flesh brought a cutesy blush to Kai’s face, who adored every shifting mass that she could feel inside of her appendage and every audible grunt of displeasure."

this is it. this is the fucking bit that slayed me. that did me in. this made me crack the dumbest fucking grin on my face with how much i loved this whole bit. i am solely dedicated to kai and her journey with how she can be the most adorable fucking monster there is. there is no turning back. i love her too much that it hurts.

"Right on top of her precious sword, the tail spat out Clorinde’s attire, covered in a muck of tail enzymes and salivary secretions which brought an annoyed look to her face. Finally pulling the socks from her teeth, her lips parted and she tilted her head back to simply feed them to herself, gulping them down with a rhythmic contraction of her throat."

lovely way to end things, the visual of kai swallowing clorindes socks is hot. and i am glad you finished her off properly.



i missed you so much. i hope you have been okay.
so to see you put out another story made me so so happy more so due the fact that you have not missed a beat when it comes to capturing the natural magic of how you write.
this whole story has just been so lovely. i could have went on and on about more lovable bits that i enjoyed but i feel i have already gone on for too long.
if you want to write an even deeper story about clorinde and her assimililation, you know that i am one million percent all for it because i know that it would be fucking goated.
thank you for giving us another story to read and thank you for all your efforts during these past few months.


take care of yourself and i cannot wait to see you again.<3