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Tags: Bad ending BBW BBW pred Belching Belly bulge belly expansion Big Belly Big Butt Bleach Bleach: Thousand-Year Blood War blob pred boob sucking burping up clothes burping up objects drooling pred Drunk pred exercise hinamori Huge breasts Hungry Pred immobile immobile pred Implied Digestion Incest indigestion Isane Kotetsu Kissing Kiyone Kotetsu Lisa Yadōmaru Maid Prey Mass Vore Nanao Ise out of breath Rangiku Matsumoto Rukia Kuchiki Shinigami Soi Fon SSBBW SSbbw pred stretch marks Stuffing Sweat teasing Vore story wardrobe malfunction Weight Gain written work yoruichi shihoin Yuyu Yayaharu
Here's a story I've been trying to get done for a long time. It's my first, so let me know if there's anything I could do to improve it. Just in case I decide to write another ending ;)
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Posted by komaedz 6 months ago Report
love the sheer amount of gluttony and decadence on display here, the only criticism i could possibly muster is that there just wasn't enough of it--but that's to be expected when you're exploring so many characters.
i think you did an awesome job creating little set pieces to really emphasize the sheer slobbish gluttony of all the soul society girls! all the kinks from stuckage to mass vore to weight gain and waldrobe malfunctions were all well incorporated and helped the characters remain distinct!!!
Posted by TheCrotchIsBotch 6 months ago Report
Yeah, I felt I could’ve dived in a little deeper for some characters. But I’m glad you liked it!