Uploaded: 6 months ago
Views: 7,695
File size: 194.70 KiB
MIME Type: application/pdf
Comments: 32
Favorites: 137
A group of friends gather to celebrate graduating high school. Partying amongst one another, they decide to try a new game; spin the bottle truth or dare: Truth or Dare where the player is determined by a game of Spin The Bottle. When one players turn comes up, an interesting truth is revealed, through an odd dare.
Google docs literally creates typos I found out so probably not using that in the future. Lot's needed to be fixed and some probably snuck through.
For people who like canon, the image is what Fiona looks like before eating anything, without the need for hands pulling in. But if I changed the thumbnail you can ignore this. Aryion doesn't let me edit descriptions post.
Please login to post a comment.
Posted by ticofallpincer 6 months ago Report
No more Part 2? Also, Endosoma? I was hoping he ends up getting digested, but this was still a really good read.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 6 months ago Report
Oh there will be a part 2! Just thought the title looked nice without it. Ya spoiler he does get digested in it, I just figured I'd put it as endosoma since part 1 ends here. Truthfully I still don't really know what endosoma means so I can change it if it doesn't fit.
Posted by FreedomPug 6 months ago Report
endosoma implies the survival of the prey, that their trip is non-fatal.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 6 months ago Report
Ah got ya, technically he survives so far. Idk keep or remove it?
Posted by FreedomPug 6 months ago Report
idk either its up to the individual really, just gave the definition.
Posted by Capreolus 6 months ago Report
Usually im all for digestion but I dont think it fits this particular story too much.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 5 months ago Report
Bit late to respond but I thought you were kinda right. Been rewriting it and will probably make the digestion story an alternative.
Posted by AnAccount 3 months ago Report
I really disagree but only because I think whatever happens will fit just fine.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
Easy to please I like it! Haha
Posted by AnAccount 3 months ago Report
This is my favorite scenario. Something about the contractual pressure and the audience is just right. Followed the tags right after since your story made me realize people tag things as truth or dare! Thanks for the story <3
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
Ya, makes for a tough situation especially for the prey. Glad I got it right and the tag could help out. I usually struggle with those or even get complains haha.
Posted by BoneZone135 6 months ago Report
This was great. looking foward to part 2.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 6 months ago Report
Great glad to hear it!
Posted by Ascendingcard9 6 months ago Report
i noticed that several times now when you post your items get deleted. Is that intentional or is eka deleting things?
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 6 months ago Report
Intentional. I always catch typos afterwards or make some uploading mistake. This time I forgot to actually attach the pdf like 3 times.
Posted by Ascendingcard9 6 months ago Report
oh okay was just wondering, great work btw.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 6 months ago Report
All good and thank ya
Posted by Hexx21 6 months ago Report
Do you know when part 2 comes out? Probably your best story yet!
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 6 months ago Report
Glad to hear it! Probably not for some time. Finished it, but then started rewriting it and think it's better now, but still need to figure out how to end it and write it. Plus finished other ones that I'll probably upload first.
Posted by BlissfulDreamer 5 months ago Report
Can’t wait for part 2
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 5 months ago Report
Glad to hear it! Not sure when I'll finish it yet but I had worked on it a bit.
Posted by MisterNut 4 months ago Report
Probably one of my favorite stories on this site. Reaaaaallly wish we got an internal after or something. Will we get a continuation or anything on this?? I'd LOVE to see more like this too, semi willing prey semi willing pred discovering they can do this.. maybe another story of this character eating another person?
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 4 months ago Report
Awesome glad to hear you’re such a fan! Probably will, but I’m not to sure when I’ll get around to it. Had a commission and other stuff get in the way recently. Started different endings so still deciding which one to finish and submit. Probably will finish the others as alternatives to upload. I will say none of them involve her eating anyone else unfortunately.
Posted by MisterNut 4 months ago Report
I think most of us would love all the different endings, even if you dont finish them all itd still be cool to see them.
Depending on the endings, is there a possibility we'll get another story at a later/much later date of her eating another person? How much would it be for a commission of that? Ive got several ideas for it.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 4 months ago Report
That’s good to hear i probably will eventually. I’ll probably tweak them anyway but if not then it’s good to know I can get away with it haha.
Probably not. Without spoiling anything the main ending which I’d continue kinda leaves that option out. Still kinda could technically, but honestly very unlikely. More than happy to do a commission tho! Open to any ideas in that case. Typically charge 8 cents a word. Feel free to dm me!
Posted by AnAccount 3 months ago Report
When fiona mutters that it has to be something organic... she really was considering making him food wasn't she? Do their friends pick up on that? Didn't notice that the first read through
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
Oh ya nice pickup. I usually put hints in stories that I feel go missed. Although, I mean, in this case she wasn’t exactly considering him food at that point, but she was equating him to food if that makes sense. It’s not like she was planning to digest, or even really fully eat him, but she wanted to put something ‘edible’ inside her, unlike a pillow. Same way someone else wouldn’t want to eat a napkin you know?
Posted by AnAccount 3 months ago Report
Yeah its the thought of equating him to edible "just in case" that makes it so hot. Even if its subconcious. If she was fully intending to let him go, what difference is it to her if its a pillow or him?
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
True that is.
If you’re asking me. It’s more just about what she’d want inside her at this point. Worse case scenario she can’t get it back up, or if a little ‘work’ is done before she can let whatever go, she’d rather that be something actually edible vs something unhealthy like a pillow.
Posted by AnAccount 3 months ago Report
Yeah i can see that. I like that train of thought, allowing it to happen meaning she is ok risking a little 'work' happening to marco
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
Ya, like she’s kinda ok with it, and grows more ok with it as time passes.