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Surprise!!!
I'm back, baby! Got my creative juices flowing again and made this!
Okay, let's back up a bit. You probably have seen the newest chapter of Semblance of Gluttony that has been uploaded by Egads . In case you haven't, what are you waiting for!? Go give it a read, as you'll need the context for this story. Here! Have the link!
https://aryion.com/g4/view/1071272
In any case, assuming you have read the chapter in question, or you simply don't mind getting a little lost in the moment, then you're free to read on.
This chapter is a bit different than precious ones. As I got some plans in the near future regarding this. I remember when the Pyrrha bad ending chapter was uploaded and the Cinder one beforehand, you all were asking if either of those would get continuations.
Well, sadly for those scenarios, I currently don't have plans to continue with those one. But, this one I do~
It's too good of a premise for me to ignore, so I've started writing down some ideas. In fact, as of uploading this chapter, I'm already working on a potential follow-up for this story. No promises that I'll get it done, been in a bit of a mood swing due to family and work honestly. But darn it, I'll make the most of what I can while I got my motivation up!
In any case, I rambled on for too long, have fun reading and hope to see you all next time. Have a great day.
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Posted by Animepoke12 5 months ago Report
Yang not existing is sad
Posted by jyoster 5 months ago Report
Yeah, it is. But that's a consequence that one must accept if things take a turn like this.
Posted by Goldendevil21 5 months ago Report
Wow, this alternate chapter is really good. First off, great job setting this up in the official chapter where Summer has always been a bit of a glutton and even a bit self conscious of her figure where she even gets a little excited at the thought of turning Raven into her breasts. And as someone who does not like her character in the show, their was an added satisfaction that now she can be useful as tits on Summer.
Second, this partly fixes my problem with the other chapter where I just do not know how big Summer's figure grows after eating her teammate. Here, it is very clear with her going from C-cup to F-cup. Though does get worse later in the chapter as it is implied Ruby ate some other kids but her figure is never elaborated on. The story says Ruby is mistaken for an adult despite being a teenager but wanted that expanded on. Do her watermelon sized boobs pop out of her blouse? Does every step she take shake her booty like a pendulum? Is her cleavage so big that she stores items in there?
Aldo do like the part Summer ate Ruby to put her in a time out. That was a great little moment. Even the little battle they had was great as it shows Ruby is still growing in her power.
Did love the little moment of Taiyang carrying the endowed Summer all the way home. His way of saying he loves all of her.
Posted by jyoster 5 months ago Report
Thanks for the comment. In hindsight, I should've specified Ruby's size like I did with Summer. That's something I'll have to keep in mind going forward.