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I should have had this out a few weeks ago, but I ended up re-writing a good chunk of it a few times. I always tend to go more than a little too far with stuff so I reigned it in a bit.
This is by far the shortest chapter, sorry about that and no actual vore. Just a lot of exposition. But I hope next chapter will be quite a bit eventful.
Please comment what you want to see happen in the next chapter/s.
If would, decide what you want to see happen during Akari's appointment with Liliana. Does Liliana try to show Akari what unbirthing is like by unbirthing Akari? Does Liliana have some willing/unwilling victims for Akari? Will she let Akari unbirth her?
I expect that the appointment will take up about half the chapter, so please say what you would like to see afterwards too!
Comments for what you want Akari to do next will be accepted until no new suggestions are given within ~72 hours of the last comment.
As always, critiques are more than welcome.
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Posted by InkIThink 5 months ago Report
Lots of good information here! And just as good of writing.
For the appointment, Liliana completely unbirthing Akari would both be very attractive and very humbling for the much larger woman, but turnabout is fair play. I think Liliana being willing would be a better read.
As for the other half of the chapter; essentially free predation means the owner of the tavern is up for grabs!
Posted by RumiBelly 5 months ago Report
definitely gotta get the nymph to unbirth the lamia. put the snake in the hole.
Posted by Schmidtyyy 5 months ago Report
The mood after that conversation is practically begging akari do snack on someone on her way home. Would also make for an awsom experienz for liliana to have something move inside akaris stomach while she takes a trip into akari's pussy
Posted by rbrdiesel 5 months ago Report
would love to see liliana unbirth akari, and vice versa in turns. no doubt akari is eager to stuff more prey in her stomach as well, so may as well do some "hunting" and get some nice prey.