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A Rivalry's Fitting End (Story Version) By dotflow -- Report

Inspired by my one commission, here's a story that I wrote alongside  UncleRippu to go with it! Ra'en is really fun to write, I love this big meaty lug!

Would absolutely try drawing/writing a battle between him and Buu.

Hope you enjoy!

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dotflow

Posted by dotflow 5 months ago Report

Also shoutout to  Tetrahedra

Tetrahedra

Posted by Tetrahedra 5 months ago Report

Oo this was a fun read! I like how yandere he is hahah. Got a kick out of Kichigo biting his tail too. But gosh I'm sad to hear how disgusting it smells inside of him :rofl:

dotflow

Posted by dotflow 5 months ago Report

I wanted there to be a proper fight between them, since they are close rivals. At the very least Ra'en finally has his monkey waifu all to himself, and everything's a positive to him besides the nose.

Tetrahedra

Posted by Tetrahedra 5 months ago Report

Yeah! I like that for them hahah. And Ra'en may dislike his new nose but I'm sure it would open a whole new breadth of smug and rageful expressions. If nobody else, at least I would prob like the look lmao

dotflow

Posted by dotflow 5 months ago Report

Maybe sometime I'll draw Ra'en (Kichigo Absorbed)... or Ra'ichigo. Get it? Because 'ichigo' is strawberry in Japanese? And strawberries are red? I'll see myself out-

Now I'm just imagining him absorbing Gohan in a reversal scenario.

Tetrahedra

Posted by Tetrahedra 5 months ago Report

Would definitely like to see it! And pff I'm sure Gohan's already in there somewhere if you look around long enough-

dotflow

Posted by dotflow 5 months ago Report

I mean, Ra'en's whole thing is that he likes savory food compared to Buu who likes sweets, and Gohan's name *does* mean "rice bowl" so-