Posted by zenitharms 4 months ago Report

It makes my day whenever you post. This particular scrap, as you call it, makes most of it's simplicity. The action, context and characters are so ambiguous that it not only makes you wonder at the infinite possible explanations for this intimate devourment but also makes the whole ordeal even more casual. They way you describe vore is so erotic and natural that it doesn't sound weird or unrealistic, just an interaction that could really happen, to the point that the reader is dragged into a world where women being meat is commonplace enough and one almost forgets how incredibly the feat of swallowing a person whole is. Bravo!

Posted by MultipleCacti 4 months ago Report

And it makes me happy to find your comments whenever I post! I’m glad the description didn’t turn you away from reading it.
I have to say, it’s nice to just write something without having to worry about the details. Especially with how much time I normally spend not only writing something, but also just thinking of what I actually want to include. No plot to keep track of, no names to misspell, just simple word slop.
I know you said at some point that you specifically wanted to post less, but it is a great way to let your metaphorical wheels spin without having to make a huge commitment out of it. I always really enjoy your work as well, so perhaps you could try it as well? I’m not saying you should necessarily post them, I didn’t really intend to either. But you might find some value in doing this sort of thing just for your own eyes.

Posted by zenitharms 4 months ago Report

I might actually try doing more quick pieces as well. You certainly did wonders with yours ^^

Posted by MultipleCacti 4 months ago Report

I hope you like it! Making something for just yourself is pretty therapeutic.

Posted by Randomdude5 4 months ago Report

I enjoy how sensual this story is. I also like how she knows what he wants and teases him about it.
The lack of backstory isn't a problem, because the actions of the characters give enough information about the character motives.

I love this scrappy unrefined story, and hope to read more of them when you get around to posting them.

Posted by MultipleCacti 4 months ago Report

Thank you for reading it. I have one or two more that I’ll probably post a little later, after I fix the formatting. I can’t help myself from putting in at least a little bit of effort, haha

Posted by Dudebro2092 4 months ago Report

Very good story!

Posted by MultipleCacti 4 months ago Report

Thank you <3

Posted by BurpEnjoyer 4 months ago Report

self indulgent horny stories always end up being my favorites, this was so good

Posted by MultipleCacti 4 months ago Report

Aw thanks! It was fun to make as well