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My bad, uploaded the wrong story last time. Someone once asked me why I usually delete my stories like three times before letting them stay up, well it's cause I usually make some mistake still. This should be the right one now. Thanks for the corrections.
Now, not to much should be different, but there are some changes. This is a digestion alternate of the main story. This was actually supposed to be the original plot, but then someone gave me an idea that matched well imo. A decent chunk of this is somewhat similar, but made some add ons and changes here and there. Going to be a part 3 and then that should be it with this alternative.
If people want me to start uploading everything as one story, instead of parts 1, 2, 3... let me know. This way gets more parts out at a time, and I think makes the size of each story easier to digest, but if you disagree let me know.
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Posted by MisterNut 3 months ago Report
Disappointed to see yet another cliffhangerish ending but again love the extreme detailing, especially when hes staring up at the uvula which is definitely weird to imagine. Kinda hoping we get to see a more descriptive digestive ending? I dont know how part 3 is but since this was the digestion alt it was disappointing to see them just kinda forget and it ending without mentioning him realizing he was going to be digested or her saying she's just gonna leave him in there, or something idk. Overall great story just nitpicking lol
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
Part 3 is ‘finished’, but I do need to add a lot of details. Will try to be more descriptive with the digestion. Actually just worked on the part where he realizes what’s going on and she tells him yesterday, so you can look forward to that! Glad you like it!
And sorry about the cliffhangers, they just feel like to good of spots to leave it haha. I’m not a fan of dumping everything at once, but I will if enough people want me to.
Posted by MisterNut 3 months ago Report
Will we get a full digestion sequence including disposal?
Ive always hated cliffhangers since I was a kid so its just a personal issue lmao it makes it alot better knowing thats not the actual end of the story though.
I think itd be great if you uploaded another story with all 3 parts together after uploading the final part, so people dont have to go back and click another part/file if they download
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
Probably not full digestion or disposal. Guess it will technically ends on another cliffhanger, but the outcome is left certain if that helps. If someone wants to commission me down the road I can add an epilogue, but the ending I’ve had in mind for a while and I wasn’t even planning on finishing this for another month or two until someone tipped me too. I have a bad habit of jumping from story to story, and there’s other ones I’d rather work on, but also I like how the main story goes more than this alternative. That one has a long idea to it to which may take some time too.
On furaffinity I think I’ll upload the entire stories in the scrap folder actually. That’s a good idea actually, but I just don’t want the gallery here or there to get to overcrowded. Also, I’m not to sure when all my stories are done. All of my current stories uploaded, except for maybe 2 or 3, actually have more sequels in mind, it’s just a matter of getting to them :/
Posted by AnAccount 3 months ago Report
Could you please link your furaffinity in your profile description? I would love to see more of your work
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
Good idea just did! But just a heads up it should all be the same work.
Also to answer your comment below their will definitely be some dialouge between Fiona and Marco. Although kinda ends with another cliffhanger regarding the group. That part I might leave up to someone’s imagination unless I ever come back around to it.
Posted by MisterNut 3 months ago Report
How much more of marcos pov will we get? Would love to see him thinking back on how it felt to slide down her gullet and more describing of how it currently feels, and his realization that he was food the moment he entered her mouth
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
Didn't have to much in mind, but I'll try to add some more. Something deep down caused him to panic a bit when he was swallowed, and was eating at the back of his mind a bit, but he doesn't fully realize he's food until part 3. Even Fiona doesn't realize he's food until sometime around part 2.
Posted by MisterNut 3 months ago Report
The anticipation is real. You're easily one of the top writers here for these stories alone, and definitely on my favorites with iliketoread, docclamor, and tinyhunter.
I'm hoping someone makes some pictures, especially for when his head is at the back of the throat with the uvula on his forehead. An animation would be amazing, i feel like lepetitejane1111 would do AMAZING especially considering his recent one for kattu.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
Aye thanks for the high praise! I'll have to check out those writers, but if someone ever wants to draw or animate something I'd never complain!
Posted by AnAccount 3 months ago Report
For me the only part of this that feels like a cliffhanger is the lack of acknowledgement or reactions and feelings of the group and fiona. Even marco doesnt have something to say. But the plot itself moves forward, implying the dialogue and. Those reactions and feelings are the best part and i would love them to be outright shown in conversation.
Posted by MisterNut 3 months ago Report
This too i'd love to hear more from marco about his current thoughts. He had plenty about him being reduced to food and the stomach probably being tight before even going in, would love to see him fighting for a good bit.
Posted by Bonetly 3 months ago Report
Love some casual digestion, as long as Fiona isn't too bothered by what she's done.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 3 months ago Report
Ya she becomes quite unbothered later on. Well, except for some possible indigestion.
Posted by theheadsn 2 months ago Report
Counting the days until the 3rd part lol
Great story so far, cant wait to see how it turns out.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 2 months ago Report
Thanks for sharing! Ya,been taking a break from writing this past month. Probably gonna be some time longer before publishing the next story, and this one a bit longer after that, but part 3 is already partially done at least.
Posted by MisterNut 1 month ago Report
Any news on when next part will be released? (Im extremely impatient and cannot wait im excited lmao) obviously no rush but progress?
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 1 month ago Report
You’re in luck cause someone just commissioned that the other day. Things are busy rn so it will take some time, but this one is the next one I’ll work on now.
Glad to hear you’re excited! You got rid of your profile pic?
Posted by MisterNut 1 month ago Report
Im a little confused as youve previously commented 2 months ago that part 3 was 'finished' and mainly needed a lot of details, and 3 weeks ago you said "probably gonna be some time longer before publishing the next story, and THIS one a bit longer after that, but part 3 is atleast partially done"
What exactly did the person commission? Or am i just not understanding something lol
Either way that means its next in line so im glad, and nah i never had a profile picture
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 1 month ago Report
Oh dope I didn’t realize I already wrote a part 3. Cool that will save me writing. Honestly I have a lot of story rough drafts and I forget what’s in the pile. Think there’s an accidental digestion variant too. Should have it ready sooner than I thought then.
Got ya, mixed you up with a different commenter who had a peanut in a top hat.
Posted by MisterNut 1 month ago Report
Are you ok??? how do you forget you have an almost entire story finished?? Im so glad i said something i didnt wanna seem impatient.. i wouldve been almost devastated if i wrote an entire story just to find out i had already done almost all of it previously omg.
Did they commission a part 3? Or an alternative ending? If it was the former, will you let them change their request as it was already in the works albeit forgotten?
Lmao nope no tophats or fedoras for me yet
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 1 month ago Report
Ya I'm fine. I write a lot and things have been busy.
I checked it and even started writing some of it recently. Now that I remember, when I said it was 'finished' in the other comment, I put the '' to try to show it was still veryy much a rough draft. I should have been more specific, but I just wrote out the plot without much description inside. I've already added about 6 pages when it was only like 7 pages before, and I still have some more ways to go.
They commissioned a part 3 for the alternative story line, so this still fits what they want. I'm gonna let them know the situation when I'm done and talk about a fair discount.