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Tags: Big Belly Big Breasts Boyfriend Boyfriend prey Consensual dress Endosoma F/M fake belly fake pregnancy Fake Pregnant fake vore Female Pred fit girl fit pred Girlfriend Girlfriend pred Girlfriend/Boyfriend Larger pred Larger pred/smaller prey Male Prey Non-Vore Pregnancy pregnant belly pretend vore pretending to be pregnant public vore Sex Sharing Clothes smaller prey Story tight clothes tight dress tight fit Unaware Observer Unaware Observers Wide hips Willing Willing Pred Willing prey
So, some of you are probably confused about the tags. How can this story have tags about pred and prey, yet also be non-vore?
Then again, some of you have probably also noticed the tags about 'fake vore' and 'pretend vore,' and for you, the answer will be apparent. This is my attempt at a more 'realistic' style of vore. This particular chapter keeps as much realism as possible, so there's not any actual vore at all. Instead, it's about the characters pretending to do vore, despite not actually being physically capable of it.
For those of you who are upset about the lack of 'real' vore, fret not; I have a second chapter planned with plenty of 'real' vore, though still sticking with the realistic theme. I've been looking forward to it for a while. If it runs on too long, it may even be split off into a third chapter, though I'm hoping to stick to two.
Incidentally, the flight number near the end of this chapter, BA113, was an actual British Airways flight, flying the actual route the characters' flight does, which landed a few hours ago as I'm writing this. I hope you guys appreciate the lengths I go to to keep these stories as realistic as possible!
Near the beginning, I describe "a website dedicated to an obscure fetish called vore." No prizes for guessing what website I'm referring to!
One last thing: I'm curious. Are there any couples out there who have actually tried anything like the stuff described in this story so far? I don't necessarily mean the going out in public part, even just the using a fake belly in bed part. If so, and if you're willing to share, I'd love to hear about it in the comments.
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Posted by vorelover14 3 months ago Report
I actually loved this. Clever idea and is getting me thinking… lol.
Posted by Adseria 3 months ago Report
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by Gendor 3 months ago Report
I do see the occasional question of "How would you play this out with your partner in real life?" and this is a fairly good three options! (Although mostly I think the third would be for the small fem prey group!)
Posted by qwertyvore 3 months ago Report
Absolutely loved this, & excited to see where this goes in future chapter(s)!
Posted by Adseria 3 months ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by dcvfgb1234 3 months ago Report
Really lovely little story.
Really liked it.
You managed to get me up qnd do maths, so kudos for that. I only do maths for the stories I get the most immersed in.
You said this was a realistic scenario and I very much agree. Simon being very slim means he likely has a bmi around 18, though note bmi 20 would be within weight limits too.
Bmi 18 woild mean he's 75 lbs.
Now, note, how much you gain when pregnant varies a lot. The upper limit for a normal, multiple pregnancy at the end of the third trimester is around 85 lbs from what I can tell, though. That's our weight limit, and Simon is within it.
Though, far from all that is part of the pregnant stomach. In fact upwards of half or more likely isn't.
The size of a full term pregnant stomach varies from person to person, which probably also is why I had a really hard time getting hard numbers for it's circumference. The best I got was the fundal height which is useful, but not enough.
It's the best I got, though, so using that and assuming the stomach is spherical, which it won't be, btw, we have a half sphere whose volume we want to find. For a normal pregnancy there'd be around 33 lbs inside it, albeit that's without considering that a significant part is in tbe abdominal cavity, so the total mass would be higher. But as Simon fully is outside Holly's abdomen this volume approximation should be justified.
Now, with triplets the stomach will be bigger, though not that much. So we're probably looking more around the 45 to 55 lbs range realistically.
Though, the fundal height only needs to be 52.6 cm to contain 85 lbs. And 50.2 cm for 75 lbs, i,e, Simon. For a normal pregnancy it's 36 to 40 cm at full term. Could it be 50 cm? I don't know. Though, stomach sizes vary a lot, so perhaps. Albeit Holly being very tall speaks against it.
It is smaller than the largest watermelons, though, and the consistent answer I got when looking it up was that a full term pregnant stomach is the size of a watermelon, so...
And there are women who get really big stomachs despite it being a single pregnancy. So it's probably not impossible somebody could reach 50 cm fundal height.
Well, most people won't consider this when seeing Holly in the wild, plus eyeballing size is famously super hard, so it's unlikely somebody would see her and think that was too big, especially given her height as people would, mistakenly, assume greater height gives greater stomach.
So what I'm saying is that I very much think it's realistic. Albeit, whether a person can fold themselves together tightly enough without being hypermobile, I'm not sure, as you will need to get close to a ball shape to not ruin it.
I am worried about the dress, though. I do consider it unlikely the fabric could swell that much without tearing or permanently deforming.
Also, in the end its your story so you should do as you want. Just wanted to add this. Hope you didn’t take it the wrong way,
Did you do maths too, when planning the plot?
As a last thing then when reading the story I thought of how it'd feel for Simon while Holly ate.
Plus how it'd be for him as she went to the toilet, as obviously he wasn't let out during that,
Wouldn't have minded those things being referenced, but it's probably not your taste and it is your story and you should do what you prefer.
Posted by Adseria 3 months ago Report
A fascinating read, thank you.
No, I didn't bother doing the maths. As a matter of fact, I just wrote something that sounded fun and sort of realistic. It's pretty satisfying to hear that the numbers work out, though. Unfortunately, I'm about to write chapter 4, which will have some stuff that will probably make all your calculations redundant. Sorry about that.
For the dress, maybe it's a maternity dress with an extremely elastic belly? IDK, I just like big bellies in tight dresses XD
As for being in her when she ate, there's a brief mention of that in chapter 3 (The Gym), but there hasn't really been a good opportunity to do it so far. As I mentioned, though, I'm about to write chapter 4, and I have an idea for how I could integrate eating into it. Scat, I'm afraid, is outside of my scope of interests, so you'll have to use your imagination for that bit.
Posted by TastesUndivided 3 months ago Report
Yes! I love fake vore and "realistic" voreplay in stories!
Posted by Adseria 3 months ago Report
Same. I wish there was more out there, and this is just me doing my part.