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Stretched Thin on Patience Pt. 1 By 0nl1ce -- Report

Well hello people in the year 2025 and hope everyone is hanging in there alright. Thanks to a certain artist on this site and some christmas savings, I decided to ask  Pog0na for another set of comissions, with the first being a comic series of the ever elastic MILF, Helen Parr from Pixar's The Incredibles. As always, comments and questions are welcomed and enjoy!

Who needs room service when anything is free game from the streets below? Helen Parr was staying over at a hotel by herself as she was doing hero work in a different state. Having bagged the crooks close to midnight after a long stakeout, Helen was hoping to have a relaxful morning. To her annoyance, it seemed that there was a large commotion going on outside her building. With pillows not blocking the noise or listening to music to try to go back to sleep, Helen groggily made herself coffee and proceeded to go out to her patio. Looking below her (not caring she had nothing underneath), she saw the commotion was from some riot. Yet the meaning behind the riot made no sense with the signs being broad like "Get Out", "We Want Freedom" and more. The chanting was about the same. What was the riot for? The operations of hotel? The heros staying here? Who? Whatever it was, things were getting roudier when their leader began to encourage her rioters to keep the effort. A young woman with green mohawk who was heavily pregnant and clearly had a lot of attitude. Helen could watch on and not interfere, but the crowd was starting to be come more restless and pulling bolder stunts from pushing cars on their sides to throwing rocks at windows. With conflict on the rise and Helen feeling hungry, Helen's half-asleep brain knew what to do.

The crowd only saw what looked like a long rope start to descend down towards them when as it got closer, they saw it was an actual arm. The arm grabbed their leader, Morgan and pulled her up with one swift moment. The suddenness and oddness of the situation caused Morgan to begin panicking as she was hoisted to the arms owner. Without giving it too much thought, Helen decided to make Morgan her temporary breakfast. Morgan tried to get away, but only managed to loosen her pants down, showing any bird her red thong and heart tattoo. With the struggling weakening, Helen began lowering the preggo down into her stomach. It was rather easy thanks to Helen's elastic body and the preggo's body covered in slight sweat from moving around so much. Gulp by gulp, more curves were sent down into Helen's stomach with Helen savoring the belly slightly before swallowing it too. Eventually, all that was outside of the mouth was the panicking eyes of the woman, looking at Helen's own eyes before she was cast down into esophagus.

Now I would to like to address that this comic does have a bit of a lesson to it, that being be careful of how you go about your causes. As while people should stand up for each other and have their rights, they should not pursue them in a way that restricts or harms others. As all it does is invite more violence or problems. In addition, sometimes while the cause may be good, sometimes it can be used as an excuse for their less favorable actions. So like in this comic as you can see, Morgan is leading these people in some sort of cause related to freedom, but is sort of elevating tension and not looking for mutual solutions. Leading to Helen unfortunately using the same kinds of actions to deal with her. To be clear, nothing in the real world or current events inspired this commission, but I'd thought at least have one commission with a nice lesson to it.

This is 1 of 3. Once again, comments and questions are welcomed and enjoy!

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