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Intruder in the Holy Bath By lothar91 -- Report

Someone is caught peeping at the leader of the Chrysos Heirs as she tries to take a dip. Eh, she was hungry anyway~

This idea came to me on a whim to do for a friend since she loves Aglaea a lot and I am enthralled by her beauty as well. Wanted to see if I could do a unnamed prey sort of story and see how it turns out.

Because someone is gonna ask, here is the thumbnail: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/126170326

Let me know if I should have expanded on the digestion scene more, if I painted the right visual picture of her after her gains and if having someone else there to react to her size increase really worked out~

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scallion

Posted by scallion 2 months ago Report

This was really good, fairly short but not too much. Really liked the reaction of Tribbie at the end!

lothar91

Posted by lothar91 2 months ago Report

Thank you~
Thought a story like this could use someone reacting to the growth and she fit the bill so perfectly! Haha!

SirBockingham

Posted by SirBockingham 2 weeks ago Report

Mamma Mia, that was fantastic! The swallowing part and the aftermath was so good, especially with the burped up stuff, that's a big favorite of mine. The digestion scene could have used a bit more detail in my opinion, but it was still great.
Do you plan on doing more Star Rail stories in the future? I'd love to see something with Acheron or Feixiao in your style.

lothar91

Posted by lothar91 2 weeks ago Report

I have a style?! Haha!
Thanks for enjoying it~ I could do more Star Rail stuff if motivated. This one came about because a friend of mine and I were simping for Aglaea and I suddenly had a good idea for something to write about her. Usually my motivation bursts come when talking about Vore and what not. My imagination goes wild and I have to write it down.