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All's Fair in Love & Vore By Fatedmeal -- Report

Summary: The Human Cultural Exchange Coordinator Ms. Kuroko Smith and the Centorea come to a dispute. One that gets real deep into the Centaur’s horse hide.

Word Count: 12,696

Author’s Notes: Yo! This has been super delayed, but I’m finally here with the winner of the last Free Story Request Giveaway! This story was outlined by  coolblooded and was double checked by  SmaxTheDestroyer . I would like to thank them both for the patience, time, and effort for making this story possible.

Readers can also consider this an early Valentine’s Day story…and the story to celebrate the 3rd Anniversary since I’ve started writing on Eka’s Portal! It just so happened that this all happened at the best time possible! As my 3rd year anniversary coincided with the 1,000th watch of my gallery. Thus, I’m offering another Free Story Request Giveaway of a story of similar length to this one. Just follow the link below for more information in my blog post!

https://aryion.com/g4/blog.php?id=84601

Finally, please let me know what you think about the story in the comments below. :-)

Character References:
Ms. Kuroko Smith: https://dailylifewithamonstergirl.fandom.com/wiki/Kuroko_Smith?file=AnimeSmith3.png
Centorea: https://dailylifewithamonstergirl.fandom.com/wiki/Centorea_Shianus?file=Feild_cera.jpg
Kimihito Kurusu: https://dailylifewithamonstergirl.fandom.com/wiki/Kimihito_Kurusu?file=MonsterMusumeOVA229.png

Thumbnail Reference: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/88470367

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coolblooded

Posted by coolblooded 2 months ago Report

Love it as always!!!! Worth the wait!!

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 months ago Report

:-)

Blackheartedreaper2

Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 2 months ago Report

Ah monster musume vore, can never go wrong with that, nice work

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 months ago Report

The prototypical monster girl manga that still has a strangle hold on many community member's fantasies. Yup. Thanks.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 months ago Report

Holy cow, I do love this slow digestion, and long term stay.

Hope the relationship going to stay happy.

Is their anything I missed about why Smith and Centaur got on poorly beyond hindering Centora.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 months ago Report

I don't think you missed out on anything overt aside from Centorea being a tad bit hungrier due to her running around. Also that the initial reason led Centorea to consume Ms. Smith for a temporary stay initially, but then she rationalized to herself that she would need to be harsher to test the civil servant's drive and will. If she was truly deserving of her occupation of being serving as a Monster Girl liaison. Only for Centorea's mood to worsen towards Ms. Smith. Due to her limitations as a human trapped in overpowering might and sensation overload of a gooey horse stomach. Of course, it seems like Centorea was able to eventually acclimate in human society based on the snapshots we get in the Kimihito household, but bad first impressions have a habit of lingering. Despite how much we shouldn't let them.

Anyway, I'm happy that you enjoyed the read~

WoreHouse

Posted by WoreHouse 2 months ago Report

It's rare that I enjoy stories with unwilling prey... but this is one of them! One prey + One predator, interesting digestion mechanics that reflect the herbivorous nature of the centauress, and all of this multiplied by your writing skills and vivid imagery.

Personally, I would have liked to explore this plot with willing prey rather than watch the misadventures of Ms. Kuroko, but that's just my preference. Objectively, it doesn't make the story worse.

Overall, the story was interesting and enjoyable to read. Well-written predatory centaurs, cowgirls, and lamias have a special place in my heart.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 1 month ago Report

Thanks for the comment. Yeah. Monster girls seem to be a niche with a large fanbase. I'm glad that I was able to cater to that with this addition.

JustAStargazer

Posted by JustAStargazer 2 months ago Report

A great story with a favorite character of mine and a topic I don’t really think about much, prolonged digestion. You did a wonderful job portraying Smith’s stay in her predator’s large stomach and displaying her will to survive being useless. It’s odd how often I find myself liking new things—perhaps it’s the execution by others.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 1 month ago Report

Thanks a bunch for the comment. Yeah...I think how palatable a scene is contingent on presentation. So I appreciate hearing that you liked how arranged and structured these sentences into the thick columns we know as paragraphs.