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Jerome wakes up to the impossible: his girlfriend is towering over him. She knows he cheated. And now, as she paddles them out across the glistening lake, his tiny body trapped against her sun-warmed skin, he realizes this is it. She intends to keep him forever.
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Posted by AnAccount 2 months ago Report
For an inhuman witch who steals souls, she sure does care a lot about being cheated on. I really enjoyed the suntanning part, and the pacing was great
Posted by RedFractal 2 months ago Report
It’s tough striking a balance of “contemporary woman” and “someone who would voluntarily shrink and eat someone whole”. Appreciate the feedback! :)
Posted by Culartha 2 months ago Report
Excellently composed. Something to savor.
Posted by RedFractal 2 months ago Report
“Excllently composed” -> thank you so much :)