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Summary/ Introduction : After a tiring but good time at the Maid Café for Valentine's Day, the Commander finally gets some free time to rest in the Commander's room... Or do they ? Just as they were about to sit down, a knock on the door interrupts them and a terrifying sight awaits them, the three members of one of the Outpost's most infamous squads, Real Kindness ! What could they be here for ? And most importantly, what do they have in store for their dear Counselor ? Looks like they will find out very soon...
Wow, it's been a long while ! I honestly gave up on the idea of posting consistently, if at all, but I recently got this funny idea ( it all stemmed from the title I thought of ) and I just felt like writing it, and so here I am !
So I am actually a big NIKKE fan, I have to say. I don't think I am as recepetive to the game's main appeal as most people seem to be, but I think the game is very good, the characters quite endearing and the setting really cool. And so it was wonderful to write a story for some of my favourite characters ! Well, at first, I only really loved Guilty, ( personal favourite, and I also live by the idea that she's a giantess compared to most other people because it's just too fitting and I saw art for it I can't get out of my head ) but being able to see all of Real Kindness' evolution in different events felt quite rewarding and warmed me to the other two. So I wanted to give them more love ! That, and I thought that the fact the mere mention of Quency and Guilty to the Commander was enough to explain the kidnapping was very humorous. So here is my take on them ! This is a continuation of the events that unfolded during the latest Valentine's Day event. I definitely had a lot of fun doing the squad interactions, and did my best to make them as in-character as possible. Oh, and I know the Commander is definitely male in the game by now ( they tried making it somewhat ambiguous at first but quickly gave up on the idea ) but I personally feel better writing from a non gendered perspective so I did just that. The Commander can be anything you want in your head :D
So obviously, I am no expert at writing. I hope not many typos made it into the final product, at the very least, but I mostly hope it's a good read ! I felt unsure a little bit as I was writing this because I felt it was not hot enough compared to many other written pieces I saw, but ultimately decided to do my own thing, if it's a sweet and cute one this time, it's perfectly fine. If I write something again, I'll definitely try to go harder on the naughty/ vore aspect for sure.
Still I'd love to hear what people thought of it, it's definitely the largest thing I ever wrote so this is a first for me here ! I think the word count is around 9000.
And lastly, I found the art on Pixiv. I am not sure how to write the name of the artist, so I will copy paste it here : 異(こと)
Anyway, please enjoy ! Wishing all the best to all.
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Posted by Newscout 2 months ago Report
honestly I think the "main appeal" isn't even the main appeal anymore, mostly everyone I know plays because it's just insane in every other way and the sex appeal is kinda just a side bonus lol.
Posted by SuuLiv 2 months ago Report
I like to think so as well, but every time I check the subreddit for NIKKE, it’s like... 95% softporn posting !! So I am really unsure where the community stands, but it’s super good to see people agree with the sentiment. I also don’t know anyone who plays the game so that might be why honestly...
Posted by Newscout 2 months ago Report
Yeah, Reddit is kind of neckbeard central. If you’re looking for the people I’m describing, the in person events and Instagram are a lot better for that
Posted by SuuLiv 2 months ago Report
I am unsure what neckbeard means, but I feel like the name says it all. And I’ll take a look at Insta then ! Sadly, there are no in person events where I live, but this is very good to know nonetheless, thank you so much for that !
Posted by Newscout 2 months ago Report
I’m part of a big group chat for nikke on insta, a good chunk of people are women and also cosplayers and everyone even the dudes including me aren’t complete horn dogs. (although to say all of us are immune to the charms of women real or not real would be a fat lie lmao and obviously I have some interest in the sex appeal). I’ve also met 2 of them at in person events in California like the recent rapi red hood at the animate store in Los Angeles.. But yes, Reddit is an awful place to find people, you’d have better luck on Instagram. If I could recommend a few female vendors I’ve bought from and have talked to at cons, it would be @mijudraws and @nekoponart. They are shining examples of the people you’re looking for. Most nikke cosplayers are also good people and not complete horndogs.
Anyways, if you’re in a bind game wise or just wanna discuss some story stuff, gameplay meta or are just a newbie wanting to learn stuff or just talk, hit me up. I’d bet money I’m the strongest nikke player on this website and I’ve helped plenty of newer players or other semi new people get into this game.
Posted by DragonDerpxShadows 2 months ago Report
While I do find the characters attractive and it initially got me to pre register the game. It’s undeniable that it’s the story/lore/ and stories of the Nikkes that kept me and most. The wai I see it no matter how much sex appeal/flashy the game is it only goes so far before it’s like any other cookie cutter haha fan service. I’m glad that NIKKE isn’t one of them. Ok I’ll stop yapping. (Also, always good to see a fellow commander! o7 do you have a favorite event story?)
Posted by SuuLiv 2 months ago Report
I deeply agree. Theoretically speaking, if a game has only the horny factor, it can have no player retention. If you’re playing for the boobs and butts, why play this game and not the millions other like that ? So it must play a part. I’m glad NIKKE is different too !
And gosh, favorite event ? Well, I skip all the depressing ones ( I firmly believe adding depression in my life is a bad thing ) and so I am not too sure ! I remember really enjoying Jinx Player, it was enjoyable and Rouge looked so cool at the end. But the recent Valentine’s event was good too ! ( might be biased because all of Real Kindness was mentioned I’ll admit ). Do you have any favorite yourself ?
Posted by Sylv 2 months ago Report
What a lovely read, gosh! I am in love with how you describe and bring life to all the characters you write for!~
Posted by SuuLiv 2 months ago Report
Oh goodness, do you mean that ? This makes me ever so happy ! I already mentioned it, and it might be overplayed but I really do get somewhat insecure about my writing. When I compare it with what everyone here does, I just feel unworthy to post. With such a comment, I just might have to post again soon if I get an idea ! Maybe my writing isn’t as bad as I thought. I even got favorites from people I enjoyed the works of before !! This is thrilling and incredible, but I am ranting. Thank you very much for this, it is very motivating. There are more stories to tell, with NIKKE in particular, and I hope to contribute more ! Thanks again so much !
Posted by skorpio 2 months ago Report
I'm not familiar with NIKKE, but this story was well-written. I don't know why you were being hard on yourself for it not being "hot" enough; it's a cute story just as it is!
Posted by SuuLiv 2 months ago Report
You really think so ? Goodness, thanks a lot. I was being hard on myself because I did not find my writing that arousing, but maybe it needs not be the goal of all stories. Your comment really makes me feel so much better about it ! :D