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Natsuki is back and this time, her hungry eyes are locked squarely on DDLC's best girl: Yuri. Of course, what she has not yet come to realise (and what her quarry will soon teach her) is that greater rewards invariably come with greater risks.
Did you know that it took Charles Dickens six weeks to write A Christmas Carol? I publish fetishistic smut on the internet and it takes me at least twice as long. Nonetheless, the second instalment of Natsuki's bizarre adventure through her clubmates' guts is finally here and the stomach she'll be staying in this time belong to Yuri, who (if I hadn't done enough to give it away already) is my personal favourite of the Doki Doki girls. I decided that it would be in character for her to have a bit of an understated preyish side, as well as to be a little less courteous to her meal than Sayori was as she lets her less presentable side take over. Additionally, in an effort to add a little variety and personality to our pink-haired heroine's experience, I made a point of changing up the internal descriptions a little. Yuri's insides are, you may notice, a bit squishier and more spacious than Sayori's.
As always, I hope you all enjoy this little offering of mine. Rest assured that there will be a part three at some point, but don't expect it to come out anytime soon. After spending the best part of a year on this story, I think I'd like to take a breather and focus my attention on some non-DDLC related writing projects for a while.
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Posted by Randomusernom 3 weeks ago Report
I love seeing Yuri display a more preyish side to her, even if I do headcanon her as pure pred. Seeing more variety in the bellies is also always appreciated, and makes me really excited to see just what Monika's will be like. Something else I really loved was how Yuri and Sayori were both acting like Natsuki was being unreasonable/childish for wanting to be a pred, and acting like that's never going to happen. I have to agree that Natsuki's better off as prey, so it's a delight to see her get put in her place. I only wish they bullied her a little more over that stupid fantasy of hers, but that's just my own personal preferences. Them gaining weight from their Natsuki meals is also hot, and I sure do this becomes a normal occurrence and they really pack on the pounds from eating her over and over heh
Posted by Fritzchen 3 weeks ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the feedback. Personally, I always love seeing Yuri as pred, but she does also seem to me to be the type of person who would have a more preyish and submissive streak, and I felt like that was worth acknowledging. I'm sure I won't be spoiling anything when I say that Natsuki won't be getting any leniency from me or Monika in Part Three.