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Tags: Absorption Absorption Vore Aether (Genshin Impact) Alchohol asphyxiated prey Aware observers Aware Pred blowing bubblegum Body part TF Bound Prey breath breathplay Bubble gum Casual vore chewing citlali Cruel Pred dehumanization Dehumanizing Prey Digestion drinking drowning drowning in saliva drunken pred F/M Female Pred femdom femdom pred Genshin Impact hallucinating prey hallucination Humiliation Inanimate transformation Macro/Micro Male Prey Mawplay mind break mistaken identity mouthplay Objectification Odor Oral Vore Painful Digestion playful pred Post-Vore Pre-Vore sadistic predator Saliva sensory deprivation sensory overload sentient stomach shaman pred slow digestion Soft Vore Soul Digestion spitroasting squishy Stomach TF unaware pred Uncaring Pred Unwilling Prey Willing Pred written work
Summary: Aether finds himself in a sticky and squishy situation. Grinding molars and a bitten soul. The adroit oral ministrations of the ageless Hermit Shaman’s continue into deeper depths. Testing the Traveler to see if he can be more than just a stomach slave.
Sequel to: https://aryion.com/g4/view/1102493
Word Count: 14,408 words
Author’s Notes: Apologies for those that have been patiently waiting for the release of the second half of this story. I can assure you that I was not solely impelled in getting this story completed this week in response to the Trending Dashboard showing how many comments the first story had and how many people are waiting for the next installment.
Anyway, I hope that you all enjoy this story for what it is…and some Citlali content. Please let me know what you think of the story in the comments below.
Character References:
Citlali: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Citlali?file=Citlali_Card.png
Nilou: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Nilou?file=Nilou_Card.png
Keqing: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Keqing?file=Keqing_Card.png
Kamisato Ayaka: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Kamisato_Ayaka?file=Kamisato_Ayaka_Card.png
Aether/Traveler: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Traveler?file=Traveler_Male_Card.png
Alice: Use your imagination…I don’t know what else to tell you. There are no official images of her.
Thumbnail Reference: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/125806875
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Posted by TempestStorm 10 days ago Report
Don't think I didn't notice that I Have No Mouth And Must Scream reference you snuck in. As for the story just wow. I don't think I've felt as bad for Aether in any other story then this one. I already pointed this out in the prologue but all this happened because Alice didn't like that he was a heavy sleeper! Maybe she should take a trip through someone's digestive system and see how fun it feels for her. Also if there's a bad end that implies that there's a good end right?
Posted by Fatedmeal 10 days ago Report
I mean…if I’m writing a story where someone’s body is transformed into one that is like a stretchy dough, and forced to feel everything he’s going through without rest, then I pretty much have to reference that work. ;-)
I might consider the Alice prey suggestion, as I’m sure that a lot of people would like to see a character like her end up in a stomach, but we literally need to wait until we see what her character model looks like and potentially after her release.Who knows when that is going to be. :-/
As for that last line at the end…that was just me mentioning the result of this route. Of the four routes in the prologue that people voted for there was one with a planned Good End.
Posted by TempestStorm 10 days ago Report
Who's route would that have been?
Posted by Fatedmeal 10 days ago Report
Kamisato Ayaka.
Posted by TempestStorm 10 days ago Report
Makes sense. There would have been more than one person which means a higher chance of Aether being recognized. Not that we're likely to see that route
Posted by Fatedmeal 10 days ago Report
Yeah. If I had plans in the near future of visiting the other routes, then I would have kept that little fact under the dark. Regardless, now that this story has reached the bottom of the abyss for you, in term of Aether’s fates, surely that means we can only go up in future stories.
Right?
Yeah. Right.
Posted by TempestStorm 10 days ago Report
Yeah right. I'm sure you plenty of more cruel game overs in store for Aether. Wouldn't be one of your stories otherwise
Posted by Fatedmeal 10 days ago Report
(0o0)
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;-)
Posted by Pew 10 days ago Report
should have been me
not him!
jokes aside, peak
Posted by Fatedmeal 9 days ago Report
Thank you. I appreciate it when people speak in Yu-Gi-Oh! memes and geographical features of a mountain.
Posted by Nandelion 9 days ago Report
Yea, Aether got absolutely destroyed here. I went with some expectation to see Citlali realize something was up... but the story was still undeniably peak. I liked that wet rag analogy drawing the limits of his usefulness as a sort of deteriorating sponge, and the slow and tedious grinding of his whole being to absolute nothingness. I loved to see this bad end scenario developed to full, and in a way they still remained close together, even if their feelings can only be exchanged one-sidedly, as some gurgling, shifting and kneading of food that now Citlali feeds to her newly-added stomach wrinkle on a regular basis. Loved it.
That said, I feel sad for both Aether and Citlali, but there's so much they could do in the way they were set up by Alice. I guess I'll personally steer this ship onto a happier note (still a great conclusion though).
Posted by Fatedmeal 9 days ago Report
Thanks a lot for the comment and your thoughts.
I definitely enjoyed being able to write about vore in a way that I rarely get a chance to do so. So I was a fan of this process too.
Yeah...I wrote the prologue before finishing Citlali's story quest and learning about their telepathic connection, so I had to troubleshoot a little with what I wanted to do with that. I decided to make it so that the intensity of Aether's telepathy also reduced along with his size.
Regardless, I'm absolutely looking forward to seeing how you steer the ship
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 9 days ago Report
This was an awesome read! Forever being Citlali’s stomach fold…! What a cruel yet beautiful fate it is! Your Macro/Micro giantess vore stories are truly one of the best ever! I know you are an exceptional writer in many vore stories, but I just can’t help but love your giantess vore stories. Your descriptions for digestion and post-digestion scenarios are simply fantastic! (Also, really nice touch with the I Have No Mouth And Must Scream reference! Writing good foodTF vore stories are really tough in my opinion, for how easily the prey loses its shape/consciousness due to the nature of TF’d food’s vulnerability, but not losing shape/consciousness and forever being a part of the giantess’s stomach flesh? Now that’s an ART! Really well-done work. Mad respect to you!)
Posted by Fatedmeal 9 days ago Report
Thanks a lot. Yeah. I’ve been meaning to write a story like this eventually. The concept given form in my work just happened to come out later than I expected in my gallery’s lifetime. I’m glad to hear that post-digestion is hitting at or near the levels of digestion. As I’m always worried if I’m giving those scenes the proper attention while keeping the reader engaged.
Also thanks for catching the reference. Yeah…a lot of food tf stories end up going the route of losing shape/consciousness. And I think part of it is the difficulty in delving into the grittier details of those scenes. Harlan Ellison‘s story really helps me channel the kind of energy needed to properly put those words together.
Looking forward to future comments from you.
Posted by DanMeister 8 days ago Report
great job as always <3
Posted by Fatedmeal 8 days ago Report
Thanks for the comment. As always.