You know it was a pretty good story, even though it contained things I wasn't really necessarily into. And, actually, really to make it just about perfect in my book, I would have had her bowel movement been the result of her trying to push herself into the small intestine. Her bloated belly would need to be shrunk down to fit and so the only option she would have left would be to unwillingly let loose her anal sphincter. Although the whole having the bathing suit on with the shit going in her vagina...that was kind of over my personal line, but I still enjoyed everything else. Nice, quick read, and most entertaining. And it had intestines! Yay!
Posted by Sukebepanda 17 years ago Report
Really great story! =D
Posted by Tasty 17 years ago Report
Heh, thx. I didn't have time to go back and edit it, so I may re-release a better version if I ever get around to it :P
Posted by ElPortero 17 years ago Report
You know it was a pretty good story, even though it contained things I wasn't really necessarily into. And, actually, really to make it just about perfect in my book, I would have had her bowel movement been the result of her trying to push herself into the small intestine. Her bloated belly would need to be shrunk down to fit and so the only option she would have left would be to unwillingly let loose her anal sphincter. Although the whole having the bathing suit on with the shit going in her vagina...that was kind of over my personal line, but I still enjoyed everything else. Nice, quick read, and most entertaining. And it had intestines! Yay!
Posted by johaku99 13 years ago Report
now if he would trun on the towns people