Very nicely written. Grammer could still improve a little bit, but I love the story, and I like the whole scenario that you're setting up with this. I can't wait to hear more of Lilith and her children!
very nice, your stories are becoming a favorite of mine rather quickly! kinda what Ragtime said but i really cant talk, my grammer is so much worse. good job and cant wait for more!
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Posted by Ragtime 18 years ago Report
Very nicely written. Grammer could still improve a little bit, but I love the story, and I like the whole scenario that you're setting up with this. I can't wait to hear more of Lilith and her children!
Posted by darkmark67 18 years ago Report
very nice, your stories are becoming a favorite of mine rather quickly! kinda what Ragtime said but i really cant talk, my grammer is so much worse. good job and cant wait for more!
Posted by magresco 18 years ago Report
That's okay, I'm volun-telling Ragtime to be my new proofreader.
Posted by shaesullivan 16 years ago Report
Will there be anymore from our loveable twoheaded canine this year?
Posted by acrylic 11 years ago Report
I hope to read more series of Lilith.