Very nicely written. Grammer could still improve a little bit, but I love the story, and I like the whole scenario that you're setting up with this. I can't wait to hear more of Lilith and her children!
very nice, your stories are becoming a favorite of mine rather quickly! kinda what Ragtime said but i really cant talk, my grammer is so much worse. good job and cant wait for more!
Posted by Ragtime 16 years ago Report
Very nicely written. Grammer could still improve a little bit, but I love the story, and I like the whole scenario that you're setting up with this. I can't wait to hear more of Lilith and her children!
Posted by darkmark67 16 years ago Report
very nice, your stories are becoming a favorite of mine rather quickly! kinda what Ragtime said but i really cant talk, my grammer is so much worse. good job and cant wait for more!
Posted by magresco 16 years ago Report
That's okay, I'm volun-telling Ragtime to be my new proofreader.
Posted by shaesullivan 15 years ago Report
Will there be anymore from our loveable twoheaded canine this year?
Posted by acrylic 9 years ago Report
I hope to read more series of Lilith.