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Not so bad as usual. I cherish this one. Sadly... It still kinda sucks and it's getting worse and worse as I get better. I can see mistakes I could fix if I cared more about having every story perfect than remembering mistakes and looking back on things. That sentence was comfusing to write.
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Posted by Lucky 16 years ago Report
This is a great story. Why is it in the Humble Beginnings folder? Shouldn't it stand with the rest of your completed works?
Anyway, I really enjoyed this story and it totally played my preference to imagine the main character as a male, so that twist threw me. It really is very sweet compared to tons of the other things you've written; I was surprised when I first read it.
Oh, and... what are you talkin' about? You're still young! XD
Posted by Carnoustie 16 years ago Report
This story isn't the one I wanted to upload under this name x3 Oops~ Lemme change the title.