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Shrike and Bereshan By ShrikeAlvaron -- Report

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Heh, okay, this is a bit different. Tonight a spontaneous vore RP broke out in the chat room I admin at, and in the end I liked it so much that I thought “hey, why not see if I can convert this into a half-decent story?” So I did, and here it is.

Because of the sudden, spontaneous nature of this story it's not my best work, but I like it anyways. I didn't even bother to proofread it, because, come on, it's basically a chat log with some narration to flesh it out and who actually proofreads chat logs? Okay, so I just uploaded a newer version with some quick and lazy proofreading applied, mostly fixing some formatting in Bereshan's dialogue that didn't match mine, and changing a slip into present tense (like was used in the actual RP) at the end to the past tense (like is used throughout the rest of the story). There.

So yeah, a little something that spontaneously happened and which I whipped up into a full story. I guess you can say it's too hold everyone over until I finish Deep Forest part 2, hopefully in a couple of days (as I said on my blog if anyone bothered to read it, I just need to proofread it now).

Soft vore, male/male, Absol/Growlithe, prey ends up unconscious but digestion and death are not detailed.

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Tanaki58

Posted by Tanaki58 16 years ago Report

I like it, I almost can't tell I'm using two characters.. XD