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A young boy meets a nine tailed fox. (This is my first vore story i plan to write a sequel to this) Let me know what you think
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Posted by BlackRose 16 years ago Report
Quick and straight to the point! The only things I saw was detail, of course, I am a scrooge for it, but detail and plus repeating yourself, using the same words and such. I know thats hard, I do it alot too. I like the way it was written, flowed better, plus, you did it with kitsunes!! Nice job for first vore story mate!
Posted by shadowfire 16 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment.
Posted by BlackRose 16 years ago Report
your welcome!
Posted by tod3690 15 years ago Report
I've seen this on Writing.Com
Posted by shadowfire 15 years ago Report
aye i have an account on there also