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This is the paper that I presented in class, check out my blog to read the response of the classmates and professor. This is in second person.
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Posted by Gentle_Grounds 15 years ago Report
Doh! Ignore the "me" and "my" inserted in the story, those were supposed to be changed to "you" or "your". We had to write our short story in first POV, and then rewrite it in second POV.
Posted by AtmosRobot 15 years ago Report
I read your blog on this story. Sounds like you won the crowd.
Posted by Parakaitz 15 years ago Report
Wow... that was fantastic, I loved it.
Posted by codyage 15 years ago Report
I have to say, I am quite impressed. The only way I could actually determine this between a normal story and a vore type one, was the small details about the stomach.Other then that I thought I would be reading some scene from novel. I quite enjoyed the story and the meanings and morals you put behind it. I have to say kudos to your work Gentle-Grounds and the writer behind it.