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Renamon Chronicles part 16:
Things get really weird, really quickly. Those of you that make it through this with sanity intact, congrats.
Also, the ‘gibberish’ -is- translatable, at least in theory. If you can manage to figure it out you’ll learn something extra. If you are successful in learning this extra information, PLEASE DON’T post what it is in the comments, PM me instead. I don’t want it said openly for anyone to see, that piece of information is for those that take the effort to figure it out on their own.
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Posted by Zagine 14 years ago Report
ok.. im not insane(not that i had much sanity go in), but reall confused. i hope future chapters explain, plus id also like to see more holesom family moments, maybe rena swallowing ruki as punishment.
that said good job and good luck.
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
I'm sure I'll fit more 'family' moments into the story soon enough.
The problem with your suggestion would be that I will never make any Renamon anywhere prey for any reason at all. I hate the idea; it's not an exaggeration to say it makes me sick to my stomach. I'm never going to do it, period. (Raze and human-Zack are sort of okay since you can say that while in human form, they are not Renamon, though honestly even that irks me slightly. Just not enough to stop me when I get a good idea for them)
Posted by Zagine 14 years ago Report
i understand completely, we all have our boundries.
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Thanks for understanding
Posted by Kuroprinny 14 years ago Report
Love it yet I'm confused
Love the part with ruki, is strange, but loved it
Posted by Kuroprinny 14 years ago Report
I meant rika part
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Strange indeed, I'm glad you enjoyed it though.
Posted by Idle Giant 14 years ago Report
Aah, another great one. :)
I always like a sudden plot twist like this, and it's not often you see such situations in writing. I could see Rena's confusion perfectly. Congrats on pulling it all off so well. ^.^
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Hehe, thanks very much. And I'm glad you enjoyed it :3
Posted by Necroshade 14 years ago Report
Just one word:
confusing
Well, i'll wait for the next chapter, maybe we'll get some answers.
It was nice to see all the old characters again.
A little vorgy would've been great when they all met.
You got all your chars from games or films, but where are the fox like creatures from, I don't know them.
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
The answers will come, but not right away, you'll have to wait longer than one chapter before things start getting cleared up (or that's the current plan at least)
The creatures are based off the ‘Ripper’ class in Monster Rancher 4
Posted by Nack 14 years ago Report
Voc, caty gsoac lyomys. Gil am al socnev? A teifnc'l bacn o zollysc.
And a red fox and a blue fox?
Did you just pull the starfox universe into your storyline...
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Ce zollysc, A syossocwyn lpy fyllysm socnevfu. Lpy ecfu tecmamlyctu qom heqyfm gytovy elpys heqyfm, ocn tecmecoclm gytovy elpys tecmecoclm.
And no, I haven’t. The creatures are based off the ‘Ripper’ class in Monster Rancher 4. It is not that world however, the world itself is of my own creation.
Posted by Nack 14 years ago Report
A wiymmyn me, yvtyffycl qesr. Qatt qy cyyn lpam bes folys npozlysm?
Ripping off Rippers huh? XP
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Bes yjlso ocn bic acbe fary ac lpam ecy, uym. Al qaff cyhes gy biffu cyynyn lpeiwp.
Hehe, I couldn’t help it, Rippers are cool :3
Posted by Zephyx 14 years ago Report
*Chuckles* Pyypyy lpol'm racno cyol, nanc'l lpacr A qeifn toltp ec le lpol, gil oqymevy, nanc'l
lpacr lpyu qysy pys zosyclm :3
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Uiz Uiz, ocelpys icyjzzytlyn yhycl. Ocn tecwsolifolaecm ec tsotracw ply teny gin :3
Posted by Jesseman1 12 years ago Report
Can you pm me how to decider this? I'm going to start crying!
Posted by Jesseman1 12 years ago Report
*decipher
Posted by Razure 11 years ago Report
for some reason I can't PM you, saying you have private message receipt disabled.
Still works with other people so I'm not sure what's up on your end.
Posted by Jesseman1 11 years ago Report
I think I fixed it, can you try again please?
Posted by Razure 11 years ago Report
Still nope, but given the age of this chapter I'm comfortable giving a vague hint here in the comments.
When it says 'to the left' that's when you can start figuring it out.
Posted by Jesseman1 11 years ago Report
Ok, NOW it's fixed.
Posted by Jaxonvorist 14 years ago Report
Ok my brain hurts now
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
That'll happen with stuff like this.
Posted by slickwick45 14 years ago Report
Hmm I've gone over all the word scrambling and word games i can think of and I still got nothing lol. But on the bright side I was able to keep up with the story perfectly.
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Send me a PM and I can give you a hint.
Glad you could still keep up with it though :3
Posted by robowiggum 14 years ago Report
...What? Seriously, i don't see how anyone can decipher that crazy gibberish >.> Well then again i'm not very good at deciphering that kind of stuff. Anyways, another great chapter from a great writer.
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Well, it is possible. I think you just have to figure out how I was thinking when I came up with the method.
And thanks for saying so, I'm happy to know this story is still going well.
Posted by Thatguy90 14 years ago Report
This one was different but understandable......kinda. Are there gonna be any more scenes or stories with rika and everyone again?
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Within this series? I don't think so, but then again I didn't originally plan to bring them back even for this chapter, so who knows what the future will bring.
For plans outside of this series? Yes, I intend to use this group again, or at the very least, Rika and Renamon
Posted by gn10010 12 years ago Report
Well, suffice to say, the title has managed to fit my thoughts here, anyways, will you be continuing this story? or are you currently solely working upon life with renamon? id really rather like to know, thanks and thanks for the amazing writing
Posted by Razure 12 years ago Report
I'm kind of in limbo with this series at the moment. I do still have ideas for where to take this and would like to get back to it someday, but the motivation has been lacking for some reason. Life with Renamon is getting most of my attention at the moment, yes, but that's not the sole reason this one's been stopped for so long.
Posted by TheGleamEyes 11 years ago Report
*pulls out checklist*
Headache: Check.
Confusion: Check.
Intact Sanity: Pfft, long gone is that.
WTF Moment: Check.
Interdimensional Creatures: Check.
Military Involvement: CHECK.
Conspiracy: Of Course.
Cake: Lie
Possible Neo-Nazis: _____
Possible Doomsday Scenario: Check.
Evil Mastermind: Check.
*puts checklist away, then proceeds to have a mental breakdown worthy of the Kishin Asura, while screaming nonsense about lying robots, lying fairies, and a savage, bloodthirsty, giant pickle*
(Needless to say: good job)
Posted by Razure 11 years ago Report
My goodness that is an impressive checklist you have there.