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So the final part, I like how this turned out, please excuse any grammatical mistakes. I don't write much. Im one of those very clean grammar types but when it comes to long stories or papers like this, I usually have many faults. BUT ANYWAYS, please enjoi fav and watch. MAX is a character made by my good friend BLEH. Thanks again for letting me write this, I hope you like this.
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Posted by Bleh 14 years ago Report
That ending was too adorable ;~;
The whole thing was very very very hot. :x
I don't mind your writing at all, your ideas are just amazing though, and I'm really glad I came to you for the original request. I really love this !
And thank you soooooo muuuuch!
Posted by partingwaters 14 years ago Report
Yeah no problem, glad you liked it, because that was totally different for me, writing and vore.
Posted by Bleh 14 years ago Report
Sorry about thaaaaat, but I think you did a really amazing job! That strange liquid was a pretty cool idea too. o.o I know vore isn't really your thing and all but you pulled it off awesomely none the less, if you ask me!
Posted by soline 14 years ago Report
Very nice, loved we saw a little more anal vore from you
Posted by Rebirth 14 years ago Report
Really cute ending. Great work.
Posted by Akiedo 14 years ago Report
After reading all the chapters of this story, I must say I've enjoyed it very much. The characters have a good amount of depth, but it doesn't detatch the reader from the story itself. Eventhough this is an erotic work, the characters are very realistic and relatable in their thoughts and feelings, being transgendered myself I feel that Nikki's problems are realistic which makes the character much more endearing to me. I've added you to my watch list and look forward to more excellent works from you.
Posted by partingwaters 14 years ago Report
1 thanks for the awesome feedback and 2, your trans? awesome. But thanks again, my work has been a bit slow lately, but I'm working to get stuff done.