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Alright, confession time. I suck as a writer but am trying to improve. This is a story that sounded much better in my head than it did when I started typing. But there is an up side to this; I want you to submit what you think the ending should be. After a couple days I'll finish the story with the most popular ending. Please comment!
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Posted by Thehungrydude 14 years ago Report
I love the story here so far.
For an ending hmmm, well how about have th kitsune make love to the poor girl after she heals her wounds when she kitsune finishes she turns her into an pup an rises her as her own?
Posted by The Swarm 14 years ago Report
Seconded.
Posted by KingdomOfGray 14 years ago Report
I don't think you are a bad writer at all, and the story itself was a decent read.
Now, as for a suggestion for the end, I would have to say that Kami (The way you have her in the story makes me thing she is some kind of demon or spirit) helps Liz get revenge on Eric in a way that is just as brutal as he was to her (perhaps killing him, though I suppose that might be taking it too far). Then, Kami leaves and allows Liz to get her life back on track the way she wants to.
Posted by I Is New 101 14 years ago Report
Interesting. I knew at some point someone was gonna bring up the 'revenge' card. XP