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The introduction will show where I'm going with this. I have a lot of material. I took my time in adding this because I had to see where Christine was going. She still has a lot to teach me.
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Posted by Gypa 14 years ago Report
I personally wouldn't mind too be on the inside of Christine is smile.
I wonder if you are going to come up with conclusion chapter were Daniel finally give in o his urges.
Posted by printz 14 years ago Report
Naturally I will. Christine is looking back over her journey to what her life has become. I have to go through a few more chapters to get there. As it is, she is more like 6 chapters into the story but I keep editing what I've written in order to ensure continuity. Christine is still not at the point where she understands that she can manipulate any man she wants inside of her stomach. Thomas only wanted it after he had been with her for several years. Did he really have ALS or did he develop the symptoms because his subconscious mind told him to? At this point, I'm not even exactly sure but I'm sharing this for the feedback. Christine will not finish at the point of convincing Daniel. I have a vision for the end that I'm not going to get into. Anyway, It's definite that Daniel is going to end up inside of Christine. It won't be hard to convince Daniel. He already had a good idea of what kind of service she offered even if he did play dumb. There would be so many options in a society where assisted suicide is a booming business. I know what I'd choose. Letting someone blast me with a flamethrower wouldn't interest me but being inside of such a sweet creature would. You know that it is a true story that I wrote this all for a real life Christine. She would just love to be like the fictional Christine. She probably wouldn't waste time lying to herself that she cares more about the people she swallowed than simply doing it because she loves to swallow people.
Posted by Gypa 14 years ago Report
I Think your arguemnt is convincing and RL Christine is your girlfriend. I personaly think myself that most guys would be easy to convince.
Posted by printz 14 years ago Report
In real life Christine is a good friend. I'm afraid that my wife isn't a good candidate. My wife knows that I write these but she never reads them. I often use people I know. I just added another section. I have a lot more writen but I want to make very sure the new parts work. The real Christine wouldn't run into any resistance from me. Don't tell my wife that of course. I always keep the real Christine in mind and I bounce ideas off of her to see what she likes and what she doesn't like. I think she's available so, if she ever becomes like the fictional Christine, she would be glad to be there for you.