Overall a really good story :) One nitpick, in the early goings you said that Jennifer hadn't seen a naked boy before, but then later on you mention that she'd given blowjobs before. Not sure which one you were going to go for (or maybe she was blindfolded?) but thought I should mention it :)
Posted by Delphinus 14 years ago Report
Overall a really good story :) One nitpick, in the early goings you said that Jennifer hadn't seen a naked boy before, but then later on you mention that she'd given blowjobs before. Not sure which one you were going to go for (or maybe she was blindfolded?) but thought I should mention it :)
Posted by AlexandraErin 14 years ago Report
Whoops, that's what I get for writing a story first thing when I wake up. This one started out as a dream.
Thanks for the catch!
Posted by kura1204 7 years ago Report
I love this story. My favorite part is how she ends frustrated. I love how the frustration leaves you wanting more.