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Chapter 6. I wrote it as soon as I finished Chapter 5.
BAM! Plot twist!
Sorry if I cut the Vore scene, leaving it implicit. I thought it would have been always the same.
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
...MIND SCREWED!D8>
This...is...so...different,that it's alittle hard...to take in...but,it's so cool~:D
Good for her,and Kevin deserved that.XD
Posted by Sy0p 13 years ago Report
Interesting turn of events, to be sure. The image of a Team Rocket Gardevoir is extremely adorable- though, I can't help but wonder how long her membership will last... Team Rocket can be a little cruel sometimes, no?
If you don't mind a bit of criticism, perhaps you could separate some of the longer dialogues into smaller paragraphs, to help the reading go smoother. Just my opinion, though.
Quite an enjoyable story regardless!
Posted by Askrow 13 years ago Report
Thanks for the advice, I'll try to apply it on next chapter.