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Hello all,


This is a story i have done for Kooshmeister ( http://kooshmeister.sofurry.com/ ) He really does have a lot of nice characters and stories. So it was a honor for me to use his characters and write up that story.

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shwarzwald

Posted by shwarzwald 13 years ago Report

I really enjoyed this. I wish we could have seen what happened to the wolf and bunny, but to each their own. Btw you did a really good job on the sentence structure and spacing.
I felt as though I wanted to read it rather than just skim through it.

JhJ

Posted by JhJ 13 years ago Report

Thank you a lot. And yes i also enjoy to see what happens to the people but this was a request and he wanted it like this *smiles*

And yes i often notice that i also skip through stuff in stories and therefor i try to build the sentences like this so the interrest (motivation) to read through it stays alive.

And to be honest. My proofready and editor is a great help as well. He knows what he does :)

thank you for your kind words.

cheers

Jack