Aaaand... Chapter 10.
I was a little indecisive about how to write this chapter. If it was better to keep something for the next one, or vice versa. In the end, I found the perfect ending for this chapter.
Dreams, dreams... always there, reminding us who we are, and what we do.
Oh, and who's "he"? Uh-uh... mystery... it looks like Mitrion has something in mind.
Awww... how cute, the two...
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Posted by Necroshade 15 years ago Report
Again a good chapter. :)
Maybe you should read carefully through your stories before you post them.
I found some small errors.
Nothing serious, only a letter to much in some words or something like that.
It may help when there is some time between writing and reading.
Posted by Askrow 15 years ago Report
Yes, you're right, I should. The only problem is that I'm terribly lazy, so I read it quickly and I don't see some errors. I'll read it again later.
Posted by ItsJustaGoober 15 years ago Report
Wow...Violet's dream started to seem nice until I noticed the changes in story and I got relatively creeped-out...XD
I think her tactics for information are...ummmm,what's the term?...to have fun with it?^^;
Awwwww,they're an adorable couple...:3
Posted by Superkoopatroopa 14 years ago Report
Awww, poor Nidoran. D:
Posted by Askrow 14 years ago Report
Wrong: poor food. :3
Posted by Superkoopatroopa 14 years ago Report
Bu-but Nidos are for hugging, not for eating. D:
Posted by Askrow 14 years ago Report
Not that one! x3
Posted by Superkoopatroopa 14 years ago Report
;o;... she didn't suffer, did she? D:
Posted by Askrow 14 years ago Report
Sycel's stomach is kinda cozy and comfy... at least she had a good time in there. c:
Posted by Superkoopatroopa 14 years ago Report
Well, that's a comfort at least. D: Though they'd make better pets than foods. They like to eat things too~ (why else are they so tubbeh? X3)
Posted by Askrow 14 years ago Report
Indeed.