Rose sat in her room, thinking of a course of action against her mother, they had been at war for a least a week now. It all started when Rose became a vegetarian and refused to eat her mother's honeyed ham. Her mom retaliated by buying and filling the fridge with veggies. Rose then countered that retaliation by making a garden with the help of her friend Jade. Her mom then countered that counter to her retaliation by buying her daughter gardening supplies. Rose then switched from vegetarian to carnivore, eating only meat, her mom then filled the fridge with meat. Rose didn't have the heart to retaliate again, so instead she thought of a way to freak her mother out.
The doorbell rang and Rose raced downstairs, beating her mother there and heading back upstairs and opening up the box to reveal a bag of realistic looking gummy people, just as she was about to initiate her plan, her computer began beeping, someone was messaging her on PesterChum!
GardenGnostic began pestering TentacleTherapist
GG: Rose! Rose!
TT: What is it Jade?
GG: A terrible storm is coming to my island!!! :(
TT: Well, I know you'll get through it without harm.
TT: Speaking of upcoming events, I'm about to counter my mothers recent attempts to beat me in our little war.
GG: Oh? How's that?
TT: Well, I have purchased special gummies online that look like humans, I will eat them instead of dinner and shock her into receding.
GG:...Ok, good luck with that! Now I have to go, the storm's almost here!
GardenGnostic has ceased pestering.
Rose was going to worry about her friend, but her first mission was set as she walked downstairs, a large meat dinner set up. Rose went and sat down, her mother and her staring intently at each other.
"Sorry Mother, but I've decided on my official status as a humanitarian." She said, showing the baggy and tossing a gummy into her mouth, however....The reaction form her mother was not what she wanted, her mother had a smirk on her face as she got up and came over.
"I've been waiting for this." Her mother said as she picked up the girl and slowly removed her clothing, soon leaving Rose in nothing but her underwear. "Time for my dinner." Said her mom as she opened her mouth wide and started putting Rose into her mouth, the alcoholic breath of her mother hitting her nose and causing her to feel light headed and unable to move as her mother started to swallow Rose.
Rose's limp body weakly struggled into her mother's throat as she swallowed Rose down, the stench of beer and vodka getting stronger the closer she got to her mother's stomach, her mother soon passed her daughter's waist and stuffed her hands into her mouth before swallowing them as well. Half of Rose's body was now compacted into her mother's throat.
"I never should have done this" She weakly thought before the smell of beer overpowered her and knocked her out, feeling her daughter go completely limp caused her to swallow her faster, closing her lips around her daughters head as she gave the final swallow. "Sleep tight." She said as she went to her room and got undressed and looked into a mirror. "I look good, even with a full belly." She chuckled as she got into bed...
The next morning Rose woke up in a sweat. "What an odd dream, I must analyze this later." She said, writing it down in a nearby notebook. After finishing that she ran downstairs and opened the fridge and seeing that it was full of regular food. "Phew." Sighed Rose as she ran to her mother and hugged her tightly. "I'm sorry for how I've been acting lately." She said as her mother smiled and hugged her back.
Posted by iliapoerion 13 years ago Report
Something is up with the story, the text overflowed the little box and spilled out over your description and the tags.
Highlighting the text made it more readable, but I still can't read anything between "started to swallow Rose" and "I never should have done this"
What I was able to read was interesting enough that I'm off to check out your gallery. Cheers!
Posted by JeremyTN 13 years ago Report
Ahhh, I know what you mean, it's a glitch that happens sometimes, I had it once I started posting stories. It should go away eventually.
Posted by leonskenedi 9 years ago Report
any way to get a better look to the Thumbnail? also great work
Posted by archvile94 9 months ago Report
Could you post the thumbnail art
Posted by JeremyTN 9 months ago Report
done! thanks for reminding me!