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Patricia never had the choice to become a predator. Was her lover her betrayer or did he give her the greatest gift he had to offer?
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Posted by Gypa 13 years ago Report
THre were lot of enjoyable things going on this story lot of love but no losers. I would have liked if Patrica had swallowed Clarie too but the only downside it went little bit to technical in explaination why anyone could swallow a person. I personally think vore works best if there is no explaination as it has existed within the human race since beinging of recorded history.
Posted by printz 13 years ago Report
That is what I often try to do with my stories. I think we all create our own universe where our imaginary creatures can function. As I've said many times, I use people i actually know as models and put them into a situation where they can't avoid it. They are forced to adjust their morality and rationalize what they do. I hope everyone understands that I know my science is bogus. I played around with different stories until I started using Christine as a starting point. I've made her into the wise vore mother. I can't make this work for everyone. I accept that a universe where vore has always been a part of life is a great place to start. I kind of believe one is likely to exist somewhere.I wrote this story for a woman named Patricia and it was all done with her personality in mind. You're supposed to see a rational business woman like any other. The trouble is that now her life has taken an absurd twist. What makes it easier for her to deal with it is her new found taste for humans. I assume that our basic needs - such as hunger - rule most of our decisions in the end.
Posted by joeburp22181 13 years ago Report
Thanks for the story