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The pain...! THE PAAAAIIIINNN...!


Ohhh... god i'm tired of this, it was alot of work and i'm really glad to be done with it.

FINAL part of a commission for Felixcraft . I know you didnt commission it, but here, have a comic. A) Because i took outragiously long about the whole thing. And B) I wanted too.

Aaaanyway, i'm fairly content with it but it's definetly not perfect, i have mixed feelings about the first 2 shots (the eyes and mouth) but everything else? I like.
I think the sun effects came out pretty nicely~Definetly my favorite part.

Also, the file i was working on was soooo massive it caused my com to lagg and Photoshop to crash (I have poor knowledge when it comes to sizes and resolutions n stuff) so i edited the size to make it smaller which made it easier to work on, but obviously caused it too look less detailed. Still , i hope it looks fine, and i hope you like it, again, it was alot of work and i hope i didnt rush things too much.

Please, please tell me what you think~!

http://high-on-fairydust.deviantart.com/

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steven1950

Posted by steven1950 13 years ago Report

*claps*amazing job thats what i thik!*laughs*

Bright

Posted by Bright 13 years ago Report

bitween? between*

Anyway, really great job on the colors and lighting I`d say.

Emanresu

Posted by Emanresu 13 years ago Report

*Isn't thinking, just drooling*

Gulpo

Posted by Gulpo 13 years ago Report

Well that's the sun down. Now she has to eat the rest of the seven planets and Pluto along with their moons, then eat the galaxy, then nail down the universe, then eat the other parallel universes, then munch down further dimensions, and finally EAT THE EMPTY SPACE FOR DESSERT.

Gulpo

Posted by Gulpo 13 years ago Report

"Please, please tell me what you think~!"

What I think is: "no serious issues." The only "issue" is improvement is possible, but Leonardo da Vinci could improve.

Further note: unfortunately, you are not as good as one of the best artists in history. So research on drawing techniques!

Thx

Gulpo

Posted by Gulpo 13 years ago Report

Finally, you should probably work on your knowledge of how to work with image file size/resolutions.

Uryx

Posted by Uryx 13 years ago Report

My only question is, how has Jacqueline resisted the urge to do this in the past?... or has she? Does the universe rebuild itself after every binge and put everything back to normal?! =O

h0f

Posted by h0f 13 years ago Report

Basically~ It's kinda tricky with an original character.

CGR-7

Posted by CGR-7 13 years ago Report

Not bad h0f, it’s rather funny. =D
Yet I can’t help but feel that it’s just... left open, ya know, and that the story isn’t finished; even if the work is. *shrugs* But... I guess that’s how it goes.

h0f

Posted by h0f 13 years ago Report

Well no, i forgot to add that in this comment, it's not TECHNICALLY finished. It was a commission and i got paid for a 5 parter.
If i get commissioned to continue it, i'll gladly do and by the looks of things the commissioner is interested in another part.
I'm just taking a break from it right now~

CGR-7

Posted by CGR-7 13 years ago Report

Aah... gotcha. *nods*

Gulpo

Posted by Gulpo 13 years ago Report

Something I've noticed: your "" isn't a hyperlink.

Gulpo

Posted by Gulpo 13 years ago Report

I asked about via PM...
"" was apparently supposed to lead to: http://www.dota2wiki.com/images/6/69/Venm_death_07.mp3

SpectralStryder

Posted by SpectralStryder 10 years ago Report

That could cause a massive heartburn