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First of the Sheila and Robert series.
This is my first item I uploaded. Please let me know what you think. If you have any tips for improvement let me know.
This story has some violent scenes in it, but don't worry it has a happy ending ;-)
If you're just here for vorish sexy time you can just skip to Chapter Four.
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Posted by joeburp22181 13 years ago Report
Very good for your first story.
Look forward to seeing more if you have an interest in this. You provide a lot of detail but at the same time know how not to overkill it. You made it fun to read because you got to see different aspects of sheila and roberts lives.
I didn't know that sheila was the naga right off the bat, so you did a good job keeping the story going and keeping me excited to read and the story just kept getting better from there.
Thanks for your efforts.
joe
Posted by FriendlyDemon 13 years ago Report
Thank you. I did put a lot of effough into it. Glad to hear you like it.
Posted by joeburp22181 13 years ago Report
Would love to see more stories like this as your time permits.
Posted by FriendlyDemon 10 years ago Report
If I can find the time.