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Dragon Ball Z Dinosaur Vore Commission By ChaosMaker4291 -- Report

Uploaded: 12 years ago

Views: 4,079

File size: 16.50 KiB

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Comments: 4

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A short story commission for Soki on this website. It's quite short due to it being an alternate version of a real Dragon Ball Z clip and because I've never seen a DBZ episode in my life. And, yes, I am evil. Muwahahaha!!

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sharky

Posted by sharky 12 years ago Report

Its a good base story, however its a bit short and I felt rushed while reading it.

ChaosMaker4291

Posted by ChaosMaker4291 12 years ago Report

I didn't have much to work with since my commissioner only gave me a 45-second video clip as my story base. Most of my other short stories are much longer and well paced.

soki

Posted by soki 12 years ago Report

Very good story, i can't say anything else! Again, i'm so sorry for the few infos i gave you, but really it was all i could give! Next time you'll have more to work on, i promise!
Thank you! ^^

ChaosMaker4291

Posted by ChaosMaker4291 12 years ago Report

You're welcome. I'm glad you like it.