Posted by Liz 12 years ago Report

A strong and skilled human female predator. Just like them.

Everything from the planning stage up to the voraicious act is written in good detail. I must say it is a great read and you should be proud with your feat.

The huntress and her prey.

Posted by IGA 12 years ago Report

good read. Very well written and detailed

Posted by Writerman 12 years ago Report

thanks for feedback and all the favorites, everybody. i'm trying to find time for my next story, which will be about a predator girlfriend who shrinks and eats people, and a guilty boyfriend who intends on finding a way to kill her in order to clear his own conscience. i'll be pushing the realism and verisimilitude as far as i can with that one, because for me, the more realistic vore is, the more believable it is. and the more believable it is, the more it gets to me me. thanks for the support!

also, when i get around to it, i'm going to write a sequel to the "Vanishing Act." It will also use the first-person/second-person voice, and will probably be about another assignment of hers.

Posted by nikki 12 years ago Report

xD Мне тоже понравился рассказ))