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So here's part one of Elf Apartments. It was originally a single, short story, but kinda got away from me. Overall, I'm happy with the results. If you pay attention, there are plenty of hints and unobtrusive puns about the anal vore to come.There's some oral vore here, but the first part is mainly exposition. Of course that leaves part 2 with the bulk of the vore content, so if you're patient, there will be a huge payoff. As a bonus, part 2 is already written and edited, to be posted tomorrow. I'm staggering it to build tension for the early readers, but this description will quickly become irrelevant. As always, comments are welcome.
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Posted by TuckingFypo 12 years ago Report
Little actual vore, but the story is good. Look forward to more.
But if this were me right there, this is the point where I would take my knife that I always carry and take her head off. Doesn't matter if you are stronger or not, if you are bleeding from both your main artery and vein, you are dead. Even if she had magic, it would still delay her enough that I could do even worse. Remember guys, this is why you always stay armed where you can. Play it smart and your wife won't be hot elf food.
Posted by Shrapnel333 12 years ago Report
But...but then we wouldn't get to the sexy hot vore in part 2!
Posted by TuckingFypo 12 years ago Report
Bah, what was I thinking. The Vore must be fed. Kill the idiot that uses stupid logic in a vore story.