Posted by leonskenedi 12 years ago Report

Exelent hahahah

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

thanks ^-^

Posted by momonari 12 years ago Report

Ok, we have a lot to work with here first I'll say: you picked a very difficult angle to work with and you did VERY GOOD for this angle !! it's sort of a nightmare angle so let's get started with the feedback !!!

1) HAND !!!! yea, I know you know that hand coming out of the buttcheek is wrong... but here's why: fingers are NOT the same size or lenght the middle finger is the largest asn so on (for further detail on finger sizes... look at your own hand) and I see the 4 upper fingers the same size, also the place the fingers come out from the hand is not a straight line by any means, the part facing out is almost circular also, fingers don't grow away from the hand in parallel trayectories from each other, they start closer and grow farther apart as they get farther from the base (like sunshine rays)

2) Lower Back - Butt transition: yea, the problem was you actually tried to connect them by the border lines on the left side; some things must be left to the imagination of the viewer when you're dealing with complicated 3D positions (And you chose one hell of a complicated angle) you're showing us too much of her back, more than half should be hidden by her enormous butt; which is so close and big it should be blocking most of her back; you can observe that the left side of her back (farther away dimension) almost looks like her buttcheek is at the lower end but then we're encountered by the closer dimension buttcheek that we can actually see in the farther away dimension, making it look like she has 2 left buttcheeks

3) Vagina - Asshole proximity: yup, they're too close, women vaginas and asshole are about 1,5 inches apart from each other, of course that's on real life and you'd have to make the transition to the size of the girl in your picture; anyway, I'd say you put the asshole in the right place but the vagina should be lower and we won't be able to see the front, just the back half of it (the half closer to the asshole) in that position and angle you're using

4) The tail: It's bending in a very wierd way !! Tails are made from vertebrae, which are cilindrical bones , they can't bend like that ... You should make wider, more open curves; look at this: http://www.marvistavet.com/assets/images/cat_tail_diagram.gif

It's still a great picture, very sexy, I love what you did with her foot !! nice placing and dimension !! also her knees (from behind) look great in this picture; that's a great angle if you can pull it off neatly !! a wonderfully sexy angle, but kinda complicated.

The only reason I won't favorite this one is: I don't buy the idea of a hand foot or face or whatever getting marked through the ass when the prey tries to get out !! I'm a fan of human anatomy and I can give you at least 50 good anatomical reasons why that can't happen even if she vored same size (which I anatomically can't concieve either because the inside of the asshole which is the colon is only 3 centimeters wide); Catgirl would actually die if that hand made her colon stretch that far from the center from heavy internal bleeding and there's at least 10 VERY STRONG VERY THICK muscles between the colon and the skin of the buttcheek making it impossible to see anything on the outside even when pushing against it... and all that makes it kind of a turnoff for me, so I don't fave pictures that have a hand or face or foot coming out of a body or making pressure marks against the skin =P

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Haha it's all good dude I just like to kinda experiment with all forms of ideas I understand not liking it :P the only turn-offs for me are anything with Male Preds and penises whether it be on females, herms or a male so I won't ever be making that ^-^; but getting back on topic i wasn't trying my best in this picture for some reason haha and because this is a entirely new pose for me and i was struggling(probably because I was up for 2-3days) I might go back and edit this picture in the future, applying all the info you gave me :) I appreciate it and I hope you'll continue to support me!

Posted by CGR-7 12 years ago Report

Very nice, Neku. =D

...And I see down in the right corner, you’ve come up with your own little monogram too. That’s neat. =)

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

thanks :D and yeah Im gonna be doing that for future work ^-^