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Not sure What Zeaphyr did.. butt(lol) his punishment will be a stinky one X3
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This is my half of me and Random4811's art trade!(His Part: http://aryion.com/g4/view/223282) I loved drawing Elise! ^-^ not to mention. Dat Ass! B3. Enjoy!
Elise and Zeaphyr Belong to Random4811
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Posted by komaru 12 years ago Report
I'd gladly take zeaphyr's place ;3
Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report
I would too o3o
Posted by leonskenedi 12 years ago Report
nice owo
Posted by StalkOBroccoli 12 years ago Report
you did pretty good!
Posted by momonari 12 years ago Report
Not your best so far but it looks ok. As always anal vore is great !! xD love unwilling too
Anyhow, the feedback:
1) shoulder lenght: Her shoulder lenght is too wide (shoulder lenght = distance between left and right shoulders which determines the wide of her back and body) they're male's lenght here, the rule is: for men the wide of the shoulders should be 2 times the head lenght (without counting the face, only the skull vault) which is the lenght you drew here; for women it's supposed to be 1 and a half times the head lenght (a much narrower shoulder lenght)
2) Her face is too big or her nose is in the wrong position: The rule when you're drawing a completely lateral side view of the face is: you divide the head/face in three equal parts you can only use the third closer to the nose for the face, here you drew her left eye in the middle third and her smile also enters that space for being so wide so in other words you drew her face too far to the back, it should all be closer to the front for a perfect side view; but I think you actually intended to make her face looking straight at her prey means facing her back and not her side: for the eye to work in that position you should draw her other eye too and make the nose in the center of the eyes and not in side view but rather a front one, she would be looking straight to the prey in that case and I think that's what you were aiming for, then you shouldn't have made the nose in side view. should be a front+side not a pure side view; remember this: the nose is the most important element in determining the center and direction of the face, once you draw it, all other face features must be placed accordingly to that angle and position; see how here eye is too far away from the nose and that makes her face look wierd? you should move the nose closer to the left eye and draw the right eye too if you want her looking at her prey there.
3)Her nose is too realistic: I know it's an odd tip to give but remember I told you sometimes it's better to leave some stuff to the imagination?? well nose details are one of those things: I recommend you just draw the outline of the nose, specially for girls; and maybe a pointy rather than round shape would give it a more anime-ish look if you'd like that
The rest looks great !!!
Posted by NotherPacman 12 years ago Report
For some characters it sucks not to be a vorephile.
I think you've improved a lot, particularly with the lines I noted. :3
Finally good luck with your artwork. :)
Posted by Sekkaasun 12 years ago Report
Haha, He likes it but he won't admit it.
Posted by Sekkaasun 12 years ago Report
Haha, he probably spanked/wedgied her to mess with her. Thats how this typically he ends up in her ass. Haha, he won't mind the smell, he really doesnt mind being sucked up there- but he won't admit that he likes being sucked up her ass..
Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report
why I admit i love it ^-^ (hence why i draw it all the timeee)
Posted by Sekkaasun 12 years ago Report
Because then Elise wouldn't do it unless she was "in the mood", like with her gassings and multiple other sexual things..
Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report
ooh reverse psychology i like it >:3
Posted by Sekkaasun 12 years ago Report
Indeed >:D
Posted by octorber13 12 years ago Report
Aww cute
Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report
aaaand sexy :3
Posted by octorber13 12 years ago Report
Lol that too :3
Posted by CGR-7 12 years ago Report
Haha... so he’s begging for the gas chamber instead of life imprisonment (so to speak). XD
Nice job, Neku. I like the feathering you did on Elise’s tail where it connects to her tail bone. =)
Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report
Thanks Im really glad you and Random like it ^-^ be sure to check his half too!
Posted by CGR-7 12 years ago Report
I did that just now, Neku; it was awesome. =)
I felt Random really showcased Sarah’s feline qualities.
Just as Stalk’s coloring job did on one of your previous pics of her.
Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report
yeah i thought so too ^-^