Posted by neferkare 12 years ago Report

Yum!

Posted by Morro 12 years ago Report

Really glad to see this chapter posted here. Absolutely love this series and how it's turning out. Would love to see part 7 and their tour of the meat plant.

Posted by KavenBach 12 years ago Report

So would I. Problem is, with all the changes in my life, including marriage, a 6-month-old daughter, a move into my mother-in-law's cramped place, and two jobs going at the same time (one at night, requiring that I sleep during the day), I litterally don't have ANY time or privacy to write ANYTHING... :(

It may come eventually. I don't know. Or KavenBach may be dead, part of my past. We'll have to see... I'm glad you enjoyed, though. :)

Posted by blackrain 12 years ago Report

Sad to hear you mite not be coming back, but very happy to hear that your doing well in your real life, other then the move, living with mother-in-law and working at nights. Do what you can. I still need to sit down and work on my own story based in your wonderful world here.

Posted by jewels76 7 years ago Report

I can't help but re-read this series over again and again. If I recall, wasn't there a Chapter 7, that was on the old Disturbed Things site.
I would love to see a conclusion to the Amazonian visitors. It is such a strong story.
Anyway... looking forward to more entries into this universe.

Thank you,
Julie

Posted by KavenBach 7 years ago Report

I have SUPER SLOWLY added to what used to be on the disturbedthings forum before it went belly-up a few years ago. Chapter 7 was... is... approaching being done, but I will need to find the time to binge-write on it if I want to release it anytime soon.

I *DO* intend to continue it... at some point... :\

Posted by Selpathor 6 years ago Report

Of this series my favorite has to be a tie between this one and #3.

I loved the risks and tests in the kitchen. If I could go there I would love to take a test or two myself.

Posted by Dracon_Kitsune 4 years ago Report

Just wanted to mention that I still love your stories and your games, and would love to see a part 7 of this series.

Posted by TrangleC 4 years ago Report

I only discovered the Ambassadors of the Flesh story recently and not here. Someone else posted it (crediting you) on the Dolcett Girls Forum (DGF).

I'm not one to give praise lightly or indulge in hyperbole usually, but I have to say this is by far the best such story I ever read and I truly love it.
And I read a lot of such story and wrote quite a few myself.

Actually, I had started writing a rather similar story and posted the first part of it on the Dolcett Girls Forum and then someone told me it reminds them of Ambassadors of the Flesh, so I looked it up and it is so good that it made me abort my own story, because I felt it would just have been a inferior knockoff.

Especially how you dive deep into the mind set of the at first reluctant and then increasingly willing and consensual victims, is great and just the kind of stuff I love.

That is what I'm after when it comes to such fantasies. I'm not a sadist, misogynist or a necrophiliac. I'm not actually interested in reading about women suffering or being killed. It is the mind set of the willing victim and the exploration of the theme of submission and dominance, which I love and death and torture are just tools needed to increase the stakes and spice it up. I've never seen it done better than in this story.

Reading about how the piglets want it, even when they can't admit it to themselves at first and then succumb to it and start craving being used and victimized, is wonderful.
Whenever the characters muse or talk about that, are my favorite scenes.
For example the scene early on when Pell and the 3 girls talk about him being a predator and them being prey, or Francy loving being dominated when she is under the restaurant table.

I turned the story into an audio book through one of those "text to voice" programs and I could listen to those passages over and over again.

I wish there was more.

This is not meant as criticism, but it seems your other stories tend to be rather different, more about non-consensual and accidental victims.

Do you have other material that is more like Ambassadors of the Flesh?