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Betty's goverment contract By don70 -- Report

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thefatalenglishman

Posted by thefatalenglishman 12 years ago Report

I still like your work, and I think your concept has the potential to be really good. I do like your 'blunt' style, but I think you could improve by explaining the process of ingestion in more detail, and also by varying the story-lines. I look forward to more of your work : )

don70

Posted by don70 12 years ago Report

Thank you for the positive input.