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Sequel to the first part. I've had the rough draft of this for quite awhile but I finally got around to editing it. I hope ya'll enjoy. This might be the last one, although I dunno.
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Posted by Saftkeur 12 years ago Report
Very nice! Part one and two both.
I almost never read fiction of this sort online; limited time, and more often then not, there are a number of grammar and spelling errors, which especially bother me. I'm quite glad I made the exception in this case (I watch the "tongue play" tag, and was too curious to resist seeing a new post tagged there).
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
I can't speak to the availability of tongue-play oriented stories, but I think you would be surprised at the number of quality writers on Eka's Portal. Just as with art, most of it is not good quality, but there are a number of demonstrably high quality and prolific writers.
Posted by Saftkeur 12 years ago Report
Oh, certainly! The main issue being that it's often very hard to tell "at a glance" if you'll enjoy a written work or not, while images can have thumbnails (or just be looked at quickly). Part of the reason why it is such a challenge to garner attention on sites such as dA with literature pieces; you need viewers to either be drawn in by your first paragraph, or get lucky and get viewers who are willing to read all the way through without knowing what they'll get.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Yes, well, in the hope that you will continue to read from us writers, here is a short list of my favorite people who are consistently Hi-Quality writers, in no particular order: and of course me, being the arrogant cunt that i am
Posted by Saftkeur 12 years ago Report
Thanks, I'll be sure to check them out!
I much prefer "egotistical" over "arrogant"; sounds much more appealing. =P (I've got a rather big ego myself.)
Posted by Calippya 12 years ago Report
Great stories. First time I've read of vote teasing to this degree. Whether you continue is up to you but so far the story is quite fun to read and I hope you continue.
Posted by jake110 12 years ago Report
wow, just wow. you sure as hell beat the crap out of part one, that was just, wow. there are no words that can express how good this is.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Super sexy. Cool to see you continue a previous story. Logic dictates that anyone making a work with multiple parts sacrifices their popularity, but it's my favrotie kind, so you can see the characters & relationships form. These characters have an interesting relationship. I'll be honest that I didn't really get the ending. was Sam actually trying to suffocate her? Or did it just sorta happen? Or perhaps Mara made that up because she decided she didn't want to eat her. Or perhaps I am SUPPOSED to be in suspsne! :)
Posted by Zwanzik 12 years ago Report
There's a part three which I'm literally about to upload that answers none of those questions sufficiently.
But yeah there are like three more parts of this so far that I have to edit.