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Moonshaker explains her actions, Hera expresses doubt, and Sam has another troubling dream.
I'm real lazy with the tags and description tonight.
edit: A few errors got past, but Saftkeur very helpfully pointed them out! Additionally, I had some problems re-uploading the revised draft, so that's why this one is in Arial instead of Times New Roman.
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Posted by Aickavon12 12 years ago Report
I just had a walk in the middle of the night... the title made me laugh at the ironicness. Good read by the way!
Posted by Zwanzik 12 years ago Report
Hehe, thanks! This is actually the latest in a series, so if you're interested, you can head back and read it from the start! C:
Posted by Aickavon12 12 years ago Report
Will do!
Posted by Saftkeur 12 years ago Report
Coming out with new chapters pretty quickly! I guess you've got more free time than you expected, or you just have a bunch of chapters already set to go. Either way, I'm pleasantly surprised!
Two little corrections, right near the end, you accidentally called Hera, Mara. There's also a small grammatical error in the same sentence, "Sam gotten a chance..."
Posted by Zwanzik 12 years ago Report
The workload is a bit light right now, and so I'm hoping it stays light. I've only had two readings so far, which makes me rather lucky.
Also; I have found that if I stop obsessively checking webcomics, watching stupid videos on youtube, and not checking tumblr, I end up with like an hour or more of writin' time. I'm trying to use my time as efficiently as possible.
Thank you for the corrections; they have been corrected. Another error I might make at some point is calling Moonshaker "Moonshatter" on accident, as well as calling Sam "Sara" sometimes, as those were the first names I thought of for the characters.
Posted by Mid_Night 12 years ago Report
Keep them coming.
I have two points for u; one u need to make bios for the characters u have and their races. And second point is u need to put a kind of data explain about the races type and how they look like and is grather plus other things.
Posted by Zwanzik 12 years ago Report
I try to let the story speak for itself; the narrative reveals information as I need it to. I might make a sheet that has the info that has already been stated, though, if people need it.
Posted by jake110 12 years ago Report
that dream sequence was pretty trippy, but they always are lol. and just the bit at the end, i had the mental noice of DUN DUN DUN.