Posted by quizmaster 11 years ago Report

Still very nice for a sketch. :)

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Posted by Lumesa 11 years ago Report

I'm glad you think so~ :3

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Posted by blackrain 11 years ago Report

yes nice work on the stomach bulge and stretching.

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Posted by Lumesa 11 years ago Report

Thank yooou~ I'm glad you like!

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Posted by blackrain 11 years ago Report

your welcome. Keep up the great drawing.

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Posted by CGR-7 11 years ago Report

Nah, I think you did a fine job on her face, Lumesa. Her eye seems a little big though, but that might just be me. =D

Man, her hair looks pretty oily like she hasn't washed it in a week. The longest I've ever gone was about three days and it itched like crazy. XP

Nice work on your first posting. =)

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Posted by Lumesa 11 years ago Report

Thanks! and my hair does the same if I don't wash it, but my max was two days. Mine's getting pretty long again, soon I'll match my avatar~ :3

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Posted by Bright 11 years ago Report

I like this picture. Nice to see a predator lay in bed with a fully belly.

I like how the bed has those stretches in the sheet. It really helps give depth to the picture.

I like the stretches in the skin from her back to the belly. Gives a sense of the skin being stretched.

The light in the middle of the picture gives a good sense of focus on the predator, though I can't help but feel that you would get more depth by adding more shadows on her.

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Posted by Lumesa 11 years ago Report

Probably, but I was too lazy to do REAL shading XD

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Posted by Bright 11 years ago Report

You said you wanted critiques, hehe.

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Posted by Lumesa 11 years ago Report

Very true :D

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Posted by Bright 11 years ago Report

I`ll try to earn that kiss, haha.

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