Posted by Robocloud 11 years ago Report

Uhm, sir... Your tags... They're.... Broken...

Posted by Marked 11 years ago Report

Good story, thanks for sharing. I like stories where the pred must be secretive about their activities, and so it was nice to see that here. I don't often see scat being used as a need to "get rid of the evidance", but I like that in this story. The beginning was a little confusing for me though. I had trouble understanding exactly why Ms. Clark was concerned with having limited time left, and misinturperated it as being a situation where she might be the pre, at least until I got to know her character better. The sex scenes were pretty nice, and I enjoyed the discriptions of swallowing and digestion a lot.

Posted by WyattGodfrey 11 years ago Report

Thank you kindly, sir! I'm happy to see my two months of work on this payed off! I use scat for more of a nice finisher, a seductive way of showing your meal just how good it was in a dominating way. I think my first Ms. Clark story helped set the mood of her being a teacher, and I thought that summer break would be a good way to start with her losing her job. The sex scenes could have been better, but I put all my effort to those last few parts of swallowing and digesting up the prey. I try to keep some percentage of verisimilitude in my story, I'm sure someone would of ran off to get a cop if that was seen anywhere else. Again, thanks so much for your comment, it means a lot to me to see all the hard work I put in make another person happy. ♥

Posted by Zelda 10 months ago Report

I forgot about this gem. It's good to check your old favorites every now and then