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This is the first in series of stories based In the Final Fantasy 11 world of Vana'diel.
it fallows my character Silena durning her downtime on her quest to become the best dragoon the world has ever seen.
Silena just can't relax with her appointment to the Dragoons tomarrow. hopefully a late night visitor can help her with that. and maybe the visitor will learn an important lesson. be careful who you steal from.
Feel free to make helpful comments
quite honestly i'm a bit rusty in the writing department right now and any feed back is welcomed/wanted
all characters are copyright
me RikuHidanza
(yes even the unnamed TaruTaru)
Elvaan and TaruTaru are copyright Square Enix
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Posted by Bright 11 years ago Report
Did she put the straw in so that the thief had something to breath through?
Nice story. I like it.
Posted by RikuHidanza 11 years ago Report
To answer your question, yes.
Posted by skorm 11 years ago Report
This is great its not as descriptive as your other stories but I'm glad to see you writing again! I thought the straw as the other commenter put it was ingenious cause im always a bit puzzled at how unbirthed get air.
Posted by RikuHidanza 11 years ago Report
Really? I feel like I was being far more descriptive. Could just be my perception since I really enjoyed writing this story.
Posted by skorm 11 years ago Report
the unbirthing process felt a little rushed
Posted by skorm 11 years ago Report
but that might be how it was intended due to it being accidental and a theif
Posted by skorm 11 years ago Report
its probably my perception that's all my apologizes
Posted by RikuHidanza 11 years ago Report
Well it was a bit rushed in total to be honest don't sweat it. Like i said in the description I'm a bit rusty in the writing department.
I'm just glad someone bothered to be a bit critical.