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Chapter One.

In which Marena accidentally sells her soul to a cat.

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Posted by ultimated 11 years ago Report

This is very good! I had always wondered how Marena had wandered into Ravyna's possession. It may not be too much of a critique, but I really did enjoy reading it, and from having done so just now, I haven't found (or remembered) any mistakes in the grammar or spelling. I quite liked some of the imagery, and most of all how naturally you seemed to play Ravyna's semi-insane personality!

Posted by darkravenomens 11 years ago Report

Is cause all I have to do is think. "What would I do in this situation?"

It's easy to play crazy when you are crazy.